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Ekphrastic Responses: Marie Spartali Stillman

7/12/2024

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Antigone Giving Burial Rites to the Body of Her Brother Polynices, by Marie Spartali Stillman (England) before 1927

Not to Lose Grasp on Fate
 
Dear Antigone,
 
You knew you were born from
Troubled parents and tragedy.
 
Tell me
What did they tell you 
When you asked about
Your grandparents?
 
Your parents
They weren’t 
Worthy of you.
 
How did it feel being clutched
By the sorrowed hands of the one man
Who was supposed to protect you?
How feeble he was in the end.
 
You did mourn the death of your father
But in what way was it any comfort?
 
You lost two brothers
To power:
 
Polynices is dead.
 
In mourning you found your freedom.
You defied cruelty with courage.
 
You were to be buried alive
But you hanged yourself
Not to lose grasp on fate
 
Of death you came
To death you returned
You were bound by destiny
But you broke your chains.

Mahdi Meshkatee

Mahdi Meshkatee is a UK-born, Iranian poet, author, and artist. His translation of the children’s novel Witch Wars by Sibéal Pounder has been published by Golazin Publication Company. His work has been published by October Hill Magazine, Nude Bruce Review, and Inscape Magazine. His writings are a continuity of attempts at decoding himself.

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To Marie Spartali Stillman Regarding Antigone

You paint her as generic grace  --
her deed more featured than her face  --  
defiant in defense of rite
immoral rule denies to spite

those filled wirh fear of death's decay

becoming feast as savaged prey
for swarm bewinged that tortures those
who witness but dare not oppose.

unless possessed of special strength
by faith that follows to its length
the hope that buries in its soul
the justice wrought by its control

that never shrinks from moment seized
to leave such evil unappeased.

Post Scriptum

So cleverly beneath this scene
interred is message left to glean
 that fame witheld by men begrudged
has been denied by gender judged.

Portly Bard

Portly Bard: Prefers to craft with sole intent...
of verse becoming complement...
...and by such homage being lent...
ideally also compliment.

Ekphrastic joy comes not from praise
for words but from returning gaze
far more aware of fortune art
becomes to eyes that fathom heart.

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Anorexia

I was sent to a cave to starve for this:
for throwing ashes over you,
a poor man’s burial, brother,
but it’s as though I turn the vultures 
away with my hand each time they 
arrive to peck your uncovered flesh.

I was sent to a cave to starve for this.
Anorexia my grief, my thin anger.
I wasted away through choice,
brother, just as Creon chose to punish 
you by refusing oils, choral
tributes, a crown, swaddling. 

I sent myself to a cave to starve for this.
I chose the sun’s absence, the weight
of death falling away from my bones.
I chose the one thing that I could 
control, sister, no matter how loud
you whispered they are coming, coming.

Who is coming to save us, sister?
Not myself. Not you. Not the vultures 
who are beautiful and hungry.
No. No one is coming to take death 
from us, like a prize. Only I throw 
the dust. I decide what is enough.

​Jennifer Harrison

Jennifer has published eight poetry collections (most recently Anywhy, Black Pepper, 2018). Two new collections are forthcoming in 2024/2025. Awarded the 2012 Christopher Brennan Award for sustained contribution to Australian poetry, she currently chairs the World Psychiatry Association’s Section for Art and Psychiatry – and loves an ekphrastic challenge.

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Ceremony
 
No mourning bell, no stranger’s deference, no bowed heads
or doffed caps, watching the procession through busy streets.
 
No carnations spelling ‘BROTHER’ in capitalised florid woe,
no hymns sung off key or hollow platitudes from second cousins.
 
No weak sandwiches and cold tea, no sympathetic faces,
no awkward silences in black Sunday best or clutched handbags.   
 
Just a darkening sky, where clouds silently rage at insolence
and crows screech above mercilessly, declaring, “He is dead”.

Stephanie White

Stephanie White is a teacher from Nottingham, England. She has recently taken tentative steps into writing and submitting poetry. When not indulging in writing, she is a regular wild swimmer.

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Antigone in Ecstasy

and though Oedipus in Spirit 
with a breasted chest, 
she is a heaving sister,
there, wild, raven waves
bound but
Standing. 

Then the heavens open 
ushering vultures, 
to feast on shared flesh, 
wasted bloodlines dried on 
this broken cliff
in these hills, body 
Rotting.

Defiance on her lips.
Appleseeds sprinkle down 
fingertips to this
wasted body covered in Rites 
to curls and shadows. 
The indecency 
of a red shawl. 

Given a type of burial. 
Ismene, 
Pleading 
for time’s wind to lift them.
Waiting. 
Kneeling, in a type of
Thaebean anti-prayer. Still,

clouds brighten
against mountaintop auras 
beneath smudges of night at end.
Heaven’s smoke provokes these, 
their only arms.
Lifting,
in a rapture of tragedy. ​

C.E. Layne

C.E. Layne enjoys and applauds characters who aggressively surrender to being mediocre. A long, exhausted, and failed perfectionist, C.E. Layne now only overanalyzes herself, by herself, in a room with a couple of windows and a great view of a dark lime green swamp, now called A Lake. She graduated with a BA in English Lit from a university in Las Vegas, got a Master’s in business to compensate for lost time, and has yet to be published. C.E. Layne participated in PocketMFA’s Spring Fiction Cohort and is thrilled to be invited to participate in the Summer Residency. She’s loved by those who gave her life, those who keep it watered, fed, and worth something more, and relied upon by two dogs for food, shelter, sun, and belly rubs.

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Ismene’s Dream
 
The caverns of her mind
The darkness of the night
The dream she can’t escape
She turns her head away
 
One sister chose the Gods
One sister chose the King
One sister chose to die
One sister chose to live
 
She sees a single gravestone
The dream she can’t escape
The darkness of the day
The caverns of her mind

Kathleen Cali

Chicago-born and Midwest raised, Kathleen resides at the Jersey Shore. Her poetic interests include formal and modern poetry and haiku. Always the student, she enjoys poetry writing workshops and working with her local library. Other interests include historical fiction and photography. Kathleen enjoyed a career as a senior auditor and educator and served as an assistant professor of business following receipt of her MBA. Technical writing and editing were a major part of her profession; now she uses her skills to craft poetry. Her poetry has appeared in  The Ekphrastic Review; her haiku was published in her local community’s magazine.

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​Dreams of Death on a Daily Basis

I dream of dead people 
as if they were still alive,
as if I hadn’t seen them in caskets,
hadn’t noticed their body-shells without souls..

I hugged my father in Tuesday’s dream,
the padded filling of his jacket,
the Ivory scent of his skin
mixed with vanilla scent of tobacco.

I waited for my mother in Wednesday’s dream,
stomping my foot while she smoked
her Kent to the stub, her jungle red
nail polish matching the filter tip’s lipstick stain.

I grieved my twin in Sunday’s dream.
We were born on a Sunday.
She perished in a car accident that hasn’t happened.
Yet.

Like a carrion crow, the accident is
waiting, just waiting. When it happens,
I will give the eulogy.

Barbara Krasner

Barbara Krasner holds an MFA from the Vermont College of Fine Arts and a PhD in Holocaust & Genocide Studies from Gratz College. She is the author of two poetry chapbooks, Chicken Fat (Finishing Line Press, 2017) and Pounding Cobblestone (Kelsay Books, 2018). Her poetry has also appeared or is forthcoming in Cimarron Review, Nimrod, Vine Leaves Literary, Tiferet, and other publications. She lives and teaches in New Jersey. Visit her website is www.barbarakrasner.com.

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​Daughter of Oedipus
 
My words become
wind--ancient and unintelligible--
like a hidden spell inside a tattered scroll
written in a forgotten language.
 
I do not know if I speak of regret
or defiance—either way
the rituals entrap me in endings--
refusing to release me, uncursed.

​Kerfe Roig

A resident of New York City, Kerfe Roig enjoys transforming words and images into something new.  Follow her explorations on her blogs, https://methodtwomadness.wordpress.com/  (which she does with her friend Nina), and https://kblog.blog/.

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The Cleanest of Ends

​Antigone knew a thing or two about death
and burial, the disposal of bodies. She knew that
the cleanest of ends is to be stripped of flesh
right down to the soul to be released to soar.
 
I didn’t know why the birds were circling the house
of the neighbor lady who lived alone. They swooped
in circles around her yard, settling now and then
in her orange trees or on the antenna on her roof
and on the clothesline where her clean sheets
dry but not taken in and folded still flapped.
The birds had been drawn by what the neighbors
could not detect, closed up as they were in their AC.
 
It wasn’t till someone, alerted by the birds,
called the authorities to come 
get those birds out of the neighborhood
and dispose of what she had already discarded.
But doing so robbed her of the cleanest of ends.
 
Antigone knew and prepared her brother’s body
for the coming of the birds who would release
his soul to soar.  

Gretchen Fletcher

Gretchen Fletcher won the Poetry Society of America's Bright Lights/Big Verse competition and was projected on the Jumbotron while reading her winning poem in Times Square. One of her poems was choreographed and performed by dance companies in Palm Beach and San Francisco, and others appear in datebooks published in Chicago by Woman Made Gallery. Her poetry has been widely published in journals including The Chattahoochee Review, Inkwell, Pudding Magazine, Upstreet, Canada’s lichen, and more. Gretchen has led writing workshops for Florida Center for the Book, an affiliate of the Library of Congress. Her chapbooks, That Severed Cord and The Scent of Oranges, were published by Finishing Line Press. 

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She doesn't know her name is Ismene.

She slices her hand up through the air, 
The heel of her hand upwards, palm flat, 
As if she were a butler on Downton Abbey 
Delivering a silver tray of sherry glasses.

She can feel her warm tears unclogging 
Last night's mascara. The sisters’ shapes
Have a rhythm of roundness - a Matisse
dance.

Her sister was always more angular, 
Hip bones and clavicle jutting out accusingly. 
They call it complicated grief as if grief 
Wasn't complicated enough…

Already…

She brings her lunch to sit in front of the
picture. 
To let her mind detach like a placenta 
From the uterus. 

Some of the dark shapes are hair, some 
Of the dark shapes are crows, some of
The crows are flying, some of the crows 
Are dead, with their feathers pulled out. 

It's some kind of ritual. 

She unwraps her sandwiches. Almost
Each day now the meal deal gets more 
expensive.

*

The younger sister has hair woven with 
orange threads,
Writhing in the sunshine and wind, 
made from the same paint as the cloth
covering the cold flesh. 
The fabrics repelling each other like North North magnets.

The younger sister looks away. She's never 
Been able to take life head on, the full force 
Of truth in her face.

She needs to hold her hand over her features, 
To hide in the shade, more of a fresco 
Than a statue.

Her skin is painted with petals from the 
hillside. Only momentarily borrowed. 

The crisps sound very loud in the white space 
Of the gallery. The crunch crunch awkward 
In her jaw and ears. But there's nobody 
Else in the room to mind. And the figures 

In the frame are held firm in their own circuit 
Of electricity, which does not include her. 

*

She will sit and eat her sandwich and think 
About her sister, quite separate from the

painting.

With her office clothes and fading hangover,
From drinking too long into the night alone. 
Red wine has always made her weep, after 
more than half a bottle.

Why do we all persist in doing things that are 
bad for us.

And the brother lays cast down on the rocks. 
Crows’ feathers scattered over the cloth on
His stomach. 

Sky is gathering night together quite quickly 
And soon the picture will get too dark to see. 

When she gets back to work she won't remember 
The faces. 
Just the circle they made: turning together 

And twisting apart.

Saskia Ashby

Saskia Ashby is an artist/poet who engages in a wide range of creative activity and encourages other people to enjoy exploring, expressing and experimenting with art. She really enjoys seeing so many perspectives from people to the same image in these Ekphrastic Challenges.

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​Tragic Theatre

The Floating  Pavilion, Oneonta  NY, 9 pm performance  
Grief teaches the steadiest minds to waver.
― Sophocles, Antigone

1.
The stage is raised
round and oaken --
a wheel on which 
fate turns the universe
with another version
of  Antigone's death. Haunted
 
by her brother's burial
(and pain beyond the ancient plot),
the young actress kneels
 
at the center-- hypnotic
with a rope of  leaves
around her head. Her hair
straight and shining
like the dagger in her slim hands.

 2.
Poised and perfumed
with  bath oil, she prepares
to stab the heart -- until
 
a bird flies in  
disrupting the act, its classic  
resolve. Dust flares in the light
along with iridescent wings.
A trembling darkness.
 
Unlike the heroine,
her own soul is still 
in dispute
 
wanting its body back,
and uses this place, this raftered ark
to panic.  

Wendy Howe
 
Wendy Howe is an English teacher and free lance writer who lives in Southern California. Her poetry reflects her interest in myth, diverse landscapes, women in conflict and ancient cultures. Over the years, she has been published in an assortment of journals both on-line and in print. Among them: Strange Horizons, Liminality, Coffin Bell,  Eternal Haunted Summer, The Poetry Salzburg Review, The Interpreter's House, Stirring A literary Collection, The Orchards Journal, The Copperfield Review and Sun Dial Magazine.  Her most recent work has appeared in  Indelible Magazine and Songs of  Eretz.

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The Penumbra
 
Dark schooner clouds unfurl
their sails above the roiling sea,
a tempest sweeps her turbid mind, leaving
a calm eye, a determination,
resolution.
 
Here the chorus sings, 
here the crows rise, black exclamations
anchoring their warning cries,  
augurs of could, not will, they
foretell war, death, but also the coming dawn.
They call to the furies; they call to Athena and
Aphrodite. They are the presagers, more than 
what they seem.
 
Antigone ignores them, the scene
Is set, she follows through, a pawn--
What is fated? What is freewill? Choose,
If you can--
 
always, always
listen to the crows.

Merril D. Smith

Merril D. Smith lives in southern New Jersey. Her poetry has appeared in publications, including Black Bough Poetry, Acropolis, The Storms, and Sidhe Press. Her full-length collection, River Ghosts (Nightingale & Sparrow Press) was a Black Bough Press featured book. Find me: @merril_mds and merrildsmith.org

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Antigone Speaks
 
I
Smuggled by night from Thebes, his body—limp,
pallid--
sprawls slack across a rock beribboned 
with kelp.
 
Fearful, dear Ismene cannot bear
to look:
turns tear-stained face towards
the north.
 
In this brewing storm, ravens claw
the wind,
croak messages of harsh revenge,
of rage.
 
II
I sprinkle soil, first full rites for him
I loved:
let fall burned petals of roses:
dark shreds.
 
Traitor, King Creon 
named him.
If he was that, then am I also
venal.
 
But hear me: Polynices was true
to Thebes.
His spirit now belongs
to Zeus.
 
III
Ismene! Up and dry 
your eyes!
Even in death, our darling brother
triumphs.
 
Lizzie Ballagher

Ballagher's work has appeared in print and online on both sides of the Atlantic. She lives in the UK, writing a blog at https://lizzieballagherpoetry.wordpress.com/. She enjoys experimenting with formal structures as well as free verse: is particularly interested in how a poem sounds when read aloud.

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Inquest

The Theban royal family, Jocasta, Oedipus, their four children, Antigone, Ismene, Eteocles and Polynices, and Antigone’s lover/betrothed/husband are all dead or exiled. The Queen’s brother Creon is King, creating a new line. All because of bad luck and tragic coincidences. But what if the story of sphynxes and riddles, of queens given as prizes, of regicide and incest, self-enucleation and voluntary exile (which, if we are honest, does seem rather far-fetched), was a fiction, a calumnious smoke screen to endorse a coup d’état, an upheaval in custom, social organization and religion?

What if Jocasta was Queen and ruler, not a prize, and what if Laius was her old king doomed to die when his time was up, at the hand of a young pretender, and what if Oedipus, the young pretender, was simply an ambitious young man?

And what if Queen Jocasta, because she loved him, when his time was up, offered Oedipus blinding instead of death?

And what if her brother Creon, inspired by new-fangled ideas that replaced the matriarch with a patriarch, saw an opening for himself? What if he killed Jocasta Queen, his sister, and suggested to Eteocles and Polynices, Jocasta’s sons, that they share the throne? And what if he suggested it because he knew his nephews, and that they would never agree to share? And of course, he was right. They quarrelled and killed one another, or were killed.

And what about Antigone, daughter of Jocasta, who should have been the next Queen? What if Creon offered her the choice, exile with her father or death? And what if, after Polynices and Eteocles quarrelled and killed one another or were killed, when Antigone returned with her lover/betrothed/husband, Haemon, it was not to bury Polynices, not to praise him, but to claim her crown? And what if that was the reason Creon had her killed? 

Because funnily enough, after all the tragic killings and blinding and hanging and fratricidal wars, Creon was the only one left.

Jane Dougherty​
 
Pushcart Prize nominee, Jane Dougherty’s poetry has appeared in publications including Gleam, Ogham Stone, Black Bough Poetry, Ekphrastic Review and The Storms Journal. Her short stories have been published in Heroic Fantasy Quarterly, Prairie Fire, Lucent Dreaming among others, and her first adult novel will be published in 2025 by Northodox Press. She lives in southwest France and has published three collections of poetry, thicker than water, birds and other feathers and night horses.

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As the Crows Fly
 
The crows unfold their crepelike wings. 
Wise birds, they know it is time to go.
I ask, so soon? My incense still burns;
I perform my rites, I perfume his body with herbs.
 
My eyes linger on the wavy hair
tumbling back on the slab where he lies. 
My fingers recall its softness
and mourn his pulsing, warm caress.
 
But life grasps my arm and guides me away,
to where the crows lead: past wildflowers,
through valleys. I live, and so I must rise.
Dearest one, this is goodbye.
 
In every bond we humans form,
loss has been preordained.
Every hello implies a farewell,
just as every first kiss imparts a chill.
 
Catherine Reef

Catherine Reef's poetry has appeared in several online and print journals. She has published more than forty nonfiction and biographical works on subjects including Sarah Bernhardt, Queen Victoria, and Frida Kahlo and Diego Rivera. A graduate of Washington State University, Catherine Reef lives and writes in Rochester, New York.

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Tragic Flaw
 
Ravens prophetically drew the sky low
squashed the lush below
chased away any foe
and ambushed the earth in limbo
winging wildly for the final blow
of a twins brothers battle throw.
 
It happened long ago
but at another epoch discord  
Spartali recaptured Sophocles’ yearning
by drawing the suspense line
along the pressing glow
of the true twins throw –
that of human and heaven,
which Antigone turns into a shrine
for horizons with divine intimations.
 
She rose to the sacred call
disregarded the royal protocol
ignored the croaking ravens
and laid her brother to rest
under a handful of dust –
her brave reverence
to the law of the divine  
above that of man
despite the suicidal chain
it inflicted as an outcome.
Logistics for heroes.
For literary pundits – a tragic flaw.
For dreamers – a contradiction in terms:
for how come upholding the divine
can be a tragedy and not eleison!
Something must be seriously wrong if earth
is estranging itself from the sky-high worth
since each inch in the universe
is appointed for the precise purpose
of sustaining gravity of life just right.
Take for free Spartali’s poised firmament
descending to its climax low
so we can reclaim our divine flame!
But take not for granted its devout herald
doing that with bare hands –
Antigone – looming large in her art
of right honorable antagonistic catharsis –
not a tragic hero but a goddess
not a mourning sister but a star
not an improbable bride but a bloom
 
if only one could break the gloom
of the man-made fatal flaw
and see the twin flow
of heaven and heart
mutually disguised
meandering mild
on our own daily battlefield.
 
Ekaterina Dukas
 
Ekaterina Dukas writes poetry as a pilgrimage to the meaning and her poems have been frequently honoured by TER and its Challenges. Her collection Ekphrasticon is published by Europa Edizioni, 2021.

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So Spoke Antigone

I am afraid for what I do,
The world about me
is dark and challenging.
I feel the black clouds
and thunder, which 
wracks the very rocks
beneath my feet, 
speak of doom.
 
The crows, scavengers
of flesh
my own flesh and blood,
ravage my brother.
Is he to travel to the edge
of the world, 
to the Fields of Asphodel
to wander a grey spirit
bereft for all eternity
of the rites of burial?
 
How small, how ignoble
seems obedience
compared to Justice,
to know that even in 
the face of death
you did what is right.
 
My sister pulls me back
to my woman’s role
that little world of spinning,
servants and child bearing.
I raise my handful of dust
in farewell, in blessing
but in defiance too.
 
You will meet my spirit,
Polynices, as one who
risked all, for that
handful of dust.

Sarah Das Gupta

Sarah Das Gupta is a writer from Cambridge, UK, who has long been an admirer of the Pre-Raphaelites but  knew little of this artist. It has been an interesting challenge.

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