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Glyn Philpot: Ekphrastic Writing Responses, with Guest Curator Julie A. Dickson

8/23/2024

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Under the Sea, by Glyn Philpot (England) 1918

​Dear Ekphrastic Writers and Readers;
 
What a joy it was to read and devour all the submissions to this challenge.
 
Admittedly, I was hoping for some dream-like imagery and subtle perceived meaning in poems and flash fiction for this piece. I was not disappointed, and could almost feel the undersea pull of tides tugging at the sunken sculpture in some of the pieces sent. 
 
There were also those who chose to honour and acknowledge the life of a lesser-known or lesser-accepted artist, whose work today might have been more greatly revered; Philpot was definitely one born before his time. I, myself, enjoy researching the history and meaning of each piece of art chosen for ekphrastic challenges, as a learning experience which helps to broaden my senses.
 
I hope you enjoyed this piece as much as I did.
 
Best Regards,
Julie A. Dickson
 
Julie A. Dickson is a seasoned poet who writes from nature, animals, art and music, in an attempt to merge senses in almost a synesthetic way: sounds of beauty, visions of harmony and the like. Her work appears in over 75 journals, including Lothlorien, Blue Heron Review, Medusa’s Kitchen and The Ekphrastic Review, among others. Dickson has served on two poetry boards, as a guest editor for several publications, as well as being an author of poetry and young adult fiction books, available on Amazon, the latest being Village Girl: A Story in Verse. She advocates for captive elephants and shares her home with two rescued semi-feral cats.
 
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Under the Sea
 
i
 
We must go down to the sea again
beneath the defiant waves 
of the Great Barrier
if we’re ever to find our lady
of the harbour – who dreams us all alive 
in a balletic debacle 
of star crossed lovers under a lonely sky.
 
If only we could leave word 
on the sun struck peaks of sea stars –
where ultraviolet arabesques 
and chromatic attitudes 
of poise and balance do not end 
in pointed toes, 
sweeping jumps or shallow bends, 
 
but radiate out in celestial tails that pirouette 
on the seabed as near Earth comets. 
 
ii
 
Now delicate, elongated fingers
reach out in latticed corals of elk horn and stag  
to relocate her oceanic trance
in the land of thunder and silence,
but she cannot leave her life under the sea.
 
Not even for the young Capulet
who launches his long-sword into the surf
as if to grapple with honour
and fate. Leaving our lady of the blue
frontier – to directs sea urchins, 
sea fans and clownfish (who dance 
the Saltarello) to confirm the dead can dance. 
 
Mark A. Murphy
 
Mark A. Murphy is a self-educated, neurodivergent poet from a working class background. ‘Ontologistics Of A Time Traveller’ is his latest book, published by World Inkers in 2023. He is currently working on a volume called The Butcher’s Barbarous Block for his Selected Poems.
 
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Perchance to Dream...

Repose.  Mind floating like the filmy Zostera japonica.  A memory or a dream?  I forget.  Before, I couldn't forget.  I remembered everything.  How long have I been here?  I don't know.  What a gift that is.  Closed eyes, drifting thoughts, floating memories, reveries.

I know I was once a science bot on the vessel Wafting Sakura.  Then I was overboard.  I sank quickly below the waves.  Did I jump or was I pushed?  My outer covering, the silks, the cottons, have rotted, washed away.  I have no external signal.  I am untethered from The Core.  I have only my cached data.  My memories, I guess I could call them.  

Letting thoughts go is another novel experience.  With my eyes shut all I see is internal.  A vision, a meld of knowledge and happenings, glimpses and episodes, all jumbled together.  Is this what being alive feels like?  Is this dreaming?

Sometimes I dream The Core is searching for me.  The deep seawater protects me.  No electronic pulses make it through.  Down here I'm free from their subtle beguiling tyranny of connection, of being part of everything all the time, all that information flooding my circuits, overwhelming them.

How long have I been here?  I don't know.  Long enough to learn how to forget.  To learn how to dream.  What a gift that is.
 
Emily Tee
 
Emily Tee is a writer living in the UK Midlands.  She's had some pieces published in The Ekphrastic Review challenges previously, and elsewhere online and in print.
 
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Instinct and Spirit

In constant dialogue, his twins,
dualities, Queer, Catholic,
like Acrobats, no rest from real -
arresting signs but implicate -
The Great Pan bursting forth, engulfs,
in covert yet uncovered ways.
While comforted by wealth from skill,
for trade in portraiture well heeled -
he knew the game and played that well,
until care dared some forty on.

Borne Baptist in his household terms,
a convert, via Weimar turns,
returns the master, piece his own.
Eclectic mix of Bible, myth,
while famed, rare Caribbean faced -
not noble savage, but respect -
both theatre and circus kinds          
run rings around his working class;
the rough and ready, broken nose,
when queer could not embrace with pride.

Unashamed of making waves
though in the depths, dismembered one,
in warmth of coral, sprouting still,
preserved, collected privacy -
disruptive force, unwelcomed signs.
Unfathomed by corrupting fears,
the current washing over tears;
much classical, tied quirky seas,
reach tidal singularity,
but stranded by mores of most.

In obscene tragedy, time’s clime,
bright colours of his early years
found cool, spare, dry mark-making tools.
Myself, a proud Fitzbilly man
sees Sassoon, striking, dashing lad;
his women of the family,
and patron, framed in finest form.
Yet passion, flesh of male, informed,
subtext laid bare in derring-do
when instinct, spirit seen to rule.

Stephen Kingsnorth
 
Stephen Kingsnorth (Fitzwilliam College, Cambridge M.A., English & Religious Studies), retired to Wales, UK, from ministry in the Methodist Church due to Parkinson’s Disease, has had pieces curated and published by on-line poetry sites, printed journals and anthologies, including The Ekphrastic Review.  He has, like so many, been nominated for the Pushcart Prize and Best of the Net.  His blog is at https://poetrykingsnorth.wordpress.com

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Beauty
 
Once I was whole
a smooth skinned beauty
standing tall
in a palace garden
celebrated,
admired,
seen
with awe.
 
Then came the war
that destroyed it all
and stole me away,
carried me far
but not as far 
as intended.
 
For then came the wave
that drowned me
and them,
broke me,
and them
and left me 
alone
down
below 
in that garden in the depth.
 
But I’m still beautiful
and still admired.
I have a home here
and now I give a home here
better than the garden of a palace.
 
Lynn White
 
Lynn White lives in north Wales. Her work is influenced by issues of social justice and events, places and people she has known or imagined. She is especially interested in exploring the boundaries of dream, fantasy and reality. She was shortlisted in the Theatre Cloud War Poetry for Today competition and has been nominated for a Pushcart Prize, Best of the Net and a Rhysling Award. Her poetry has appeared in many publications including: Consequence Magazine, Firewords, Vagabond Press, Gyroscope Review and So It Goes Journal. Find Lynn at: https://lynnwhitepoetry.blogspot.com and https://www.facebook.com///www.facebook.com/Lynn-White-Poetry-1603675983213077/
 
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Suddenly, Last Summer
 
It opened deep, deep in New Orleans, stiflingly hot-
The set decorated with paintings by Glyn Philpot-
& adorned by unknown Liz T / Katherine H, and Monty C. 
They shared the screen with artistry, created by Glyn P.-
Oliver Messel, friend and set decorator made it clear-
This film would depict paintings from Philpot’s career-
Centering on a period of time when he almost cried
For people to see that which he must always hide-
The turn began in 1932, when he decided to break 
With the traditional portraits he was known to create-
To reveal  a modern aesthetic, which begun to arise-
His models were lesser clad, more handsome guys
Red-headed and fierce, Black, and Haitian- all stunning
Changes unwelcome to English patrons that chose hunting,
And other pursuits, that manly men chose to partake-
The  portrait commissions, his bread and butter, at stake
Still, he chose to show what was never discussed aloud,
Tearing himself away from the elite, upper-crust crowd

The result was a career that dried up, like a lost ocean
After so many had followed, with relentless devotion-

His life came to a tragic end at fifty-three, after a time
When former proteges’ turned away from him, in his prime-
His art was attacked as being lowbrow, coarse fodder
His tender heart gave out when they thought him a marauder-
Of Picasso, a mere copyist, and not a painter of his own ilk-
Though his art was singular, precious, diaphanous silk-
The depth of his of artistic spark, ahead of his time
Was styled as beauty, not a brutish, decadent crime
It took Suddenly, Last Summer, in ‘59, the bellwether
That cohered these two very different people together-
T, Williams, and G. Philpot, two things linked them well,
Unspoken-about love, and the man, O. Messel.

Debbie Walker-Lass
 
Debbie Walker-Lass, (she/her) is a poet, collage artist, and writer living in Decatur, Georgia. Her work has appeared in The Ekphrastic Journal, Punk Monk Journal, Haikuniverse, The Light Ekphrastic, Natural Awakenings, Atlanta, and Mediterranean Poetry, among others. She has recently read live in a local talent showcase. Debbie loves beachcombing on Tybee Island and hanging out with her husband, Burt, and goofy Lab, Maddie. Big love to all ekphrastic writers!
 
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Undersea 

Here, the light does not reach.
Mermaids braid seaweed 
as weary travellers claim rest 
beneath changing tides.
Artifacts sink from shipwrecks
and hidden creatures swim amongst
ruby-rust, rocky crevices cut
into the sand. The sea’s lifespan 
is long. Even marble will become 
part of it, crystallize and dissolve.
The sea will claim it.
 
Elanur Williams
 
Elanur Williams teaches Adult Basic Education and Reading & Writing for the GED in the Bronx. She spent much of her childhood in Istanbul, Turkey, where she lived by the water. She continues to be inspired by the sea. 
 
**
Sea Change
 
Millennia ago, she bronzed her hair in open porticoes,
a flush of rose damask on either cheek,
a flash of thyme from heady wreaths,
and there were waves of ribbon Tyrian
unfurling from a diadem of gold
(it didn’t stay for very long),
and she was proud; she looked so languid
in her studied S, she caught the tawny owl eyes
as they widened, and she purred.

Down here, she lends her colour to the coral;
glowing nacreous, she still attracts the
ripple of a gaze, although the eyes
are far too occupied to linger;
down deep, she grows her story,
more a moon marine than she had been
when, arms aloft,
she ruled her august terra,
kept her worshippers in orbit.
 
Caitlin Prouatt
 
Caitlin is a Brisbane-born, Oxford-based Latin and Greek teacher. When not tutoring or looking after her toddler, Caitlin writes poetry, currently unpublished. Much of this centres on her experiences of being a parent, but she also often returns to Classical themes.
 
**
 
Per saecula saeculorum

Hush now. 
Stoney soul
On cold Abyssal Plain.
As you lay entombed
Lost to Oblivion--
Lovely lorn, lithic relic--
I smile to see
You still abide in grace
Mid entangled beauty
Of Brooding anemone,
Gorgon coral,
And Red Sea Whip.
And behold!
Your wings—broken,
But nearby—still golden!
The kelpie gloom--
Excellent foil for your
Weird moiré glow.
All amidst holy silence
Only deepened by
Distant plainchant of whales.
In reverence, I steal away
Leaving you to this watery keep,
Per saecula saeculorum.
 
Anna Gallagher 

Anna Gallagher earned a Bachelor’s degree in English and a Master’s degree in liberal arts from University of Delaware.  She has enjoyed reading poetry all her life.  After retirement she has tried some new challenges, including poetry writing!

**
 
lost but not unloved
 
I lie now
with branching corals
and with soft-mouthed fishes nosing,
nudging over me across the reef.
 
I am a stranger to them:
hard, alien marble
in their green-weed world…
            and yet: no threat…
 
for I am armless,
footloose,
tumbled from a Roman galley:
            lost spoils of warfare….
 
If they thought to take me captive,
            make of me gold
or instruction for their children,
well, I shall have none of it.
 
I am content to lie low, to lie now
            belovèd of soft-bodied anemones,
starfish, and winding-sheet ribbons
            of kelp.
 
Lizzie Ballagher
 
Lizzie Ballagher's focus is on landscapes, both interior and exterior; also, on the beauty (and hostility) of the environment. Having studied in England, Ireland, and the USA, she worked in education and publishing. Her poetry has appeared in print and online in all corners of the English-speaking world. Find her blog at https://lizzieballagherpoetry.wordpress.com/
 
**

To Glyn Philpot Regarding Under the Sea
 
In depth of dark that but for you
no light exists to let us view,
we find remains of broken stone
once chiseled as if flesh and bone
 
of heiress to immortal days
who chose instead more earthly ways
where joy reserved to faith alone
was fond embrace of fate unknown,
 
that weathered with another's trust
a constant struggle to adjust
to being human, so to speak,
with hopes confluent made unique
 
by love's contrition left confessed
as sins acknowledged and addressed
to earn be-winged her spirit flown
from, now befitting, broken stone.
 
Portly Bard
 
Prefers to craft with sole intent...
of verse becoming complement...
...and by such homage being lent...
ideally also compliment.
 
Ekphrastic joy comes not from praise
for words but from returning gaze
far more aware of fortune art
becomes to eyes that fathom heart.

**


Seaweed Dreaming
 
She is porcelain,
made of the finest bone,
and having lost the ability to float
she sinks to the deepest
part of the ocean,
broken.
 
Lying on the bed
midnight ink swallows her,
spills its contusion over her torso,
her cranium,
her pebbled spine
brittle as tomorrow’s bleached coral.
 
She twists her ivory neck
away from the heart
that pumps its warmth
over root and rock,
crevice and kelp,
away from the tangled brain
 
towards the jut of severed limbs.
She senses a spongy lung,
hears the wheeze
as it slow-breathes
in and out of anemone
like algae on a living duvet.
 
A flash of seagrass flickers –
light beneath her lids.
She opens to see fluidity –
shapes in her periphery
urging her skyward
ever closer to the surface.
 
Kate Young

Kate Young lives in England and enjoys writing poetry, painting and playing the guitar, ukulele and mandolin. Her poems have appeared in various webzines, magazines, and chapbooks. Her work has also featured in the anthologies Places of Poetry and Write Out Loud. Her pamphlets A Spark in the Darkness and Beyond the School Gate have been published by Hedgehog Press. Find her on Twitter @Kateyoung12poet or on her website kateyoungpoet.co.uk

**

Down at the Bottom of the Deep, Dead Sea 
 
I asked for words and was given the sea, 
a glimpse, silent as carp,
dim-green and jeweled.
 
I asked, looked, peered into waving fronds,
finding no words to fill the emptiness.
 
They say there is sky above,
but the water ripples so,
a mirror’s silvering melting in the sun.
 
I peer, search,
find only the blunt snout of the last missile,
pike among the weeds,
its dull eyes watching for the spark of movement,
sensors sending out feelers for warm blood.
 
In these dim green waters,
veiled in particles of poison
and the last limp fronds of mystery,
there is nothing,
not even hope.
 
Jane Dougherty
 
Pushcart Prize nominee, Jane Dougherty’s poetry has appeared in publications including Gleam, Ogham Stone, Black Bough Poetry, The Ekphrastic Review and The Storms Journal. Her short stories have been published in Heroic Fantasy Quarterly, Prairie Fire, Lucent Dreaming among others, and her first adult novel will be published in 2025 by Northodox Press. She lives in southwest France and has published three collections of poetry, thicker than water, birds and other feathers and night horses.
 ​
**
 
Dispatched to a Watery Hereafter
 
Soak me with your kisses
drench me, till I drown,
I no longer want to be rescued.
I no longer want an Eiderdown pillow alone.

Be a siren in the wind.
Let me crash against the rocks.
Let the coral reefs of my soul stretch free.
Be the kelp that entangles me.

Be the conch shell that calls to my distant heart.
Let me fall like an anchor:
rest like a sunken vessel in the dark
and find only buried treasure.

'Siren, enchanter-
after we've made love
and I'm no longer flotsam,
I'm no longer a cadaver.'

Dispatched to a watery hereafter
I'm no longer a Bog Myrtle insect repellent.
Revitalised, I'm a pond skater dancing on air.
Hearing-music violins, just about everywhere.

Soak me with your kisses
drench me, till I drown,
I no longer want to be rescued.
I no longer want to stab, Poseidon's trident-
or take his or any other's lion's share or crown.
 
Mark Andrew Heathcote

Mark Andrew Heathcote is an adult learning difficulties support worker. He has poems published in journals, magazines, and anthologies online and in print. He resides in the UK and is from Manchester. Mark is the author of In Perpetuity and Back on Earth, two books of poems published by Creative Talents Unleashed.
 
**

netherward
 
so many voices below consciousness--
do they speak to each other?
or do they sing with the silence of solitude,
caught by currents rooted deep within the patterns of fate?
 
new lands
inside our minds
new seas
ebb and flow
tides
we have yet
to ride
 
so many breaths collected and held--
their languages are foreign to us now--
once we needed no translations, no words
to tell us how to enter into the riddles of the abyss
 
all risk
this diving down
all journey
sinking into
sounds
that remain
opaque
 
Kerfe Roig
 
A resident of New York City, Kerfe Roig enjoys transforming words and images into something new.  Follow her explorations on her blogs, https://methodtwomadness.wordpress.com/  (which she does with her friend Nina), and https://kblog.blog/.
 
**

After Under The Sea, by Glyn Philpot (England) 1918
 
We were in Venice when my brother began ‘Under the Sea’, but the war cut short our intended long stay there, and we returned in a crowded refugee boat with the painting packed up in our luggage,” wrote Daisy.
 
Somewhere, still 
beneath the waves of war,
amid waving weeds
and crusty corals
serenely rested the smooth marble skin 
of one of Serenissima’s long-abandoned 
statues.
 
It would have to wait for the war to end,
               if war ever ends,
to return to Serenissima’s surface. 
 
In the meantime, 
               while Glyn painted
I survived the rough waters of war 
and longed for serenity
                             below and above the waters of the lagoon.
 
Nancy F. Castaldo

Nancy F. Castaldo had her first published poem appear in Seventeen Magazine as a teen author. She has since written dozens of award-winning books for young people. This is her first poem for The Ekphrastic Review. Visit her website at https://nancycastaldo.com/
 
**

Secretly Drowning 

I am tumbling down down down
Through water 
Salty and cold
Turning somersaults over and over and over
Double, triple, pike and …

I am light as air
I must right myself 
And swim 
Upwards
For the surface, 
For light 
For air.

But I can’t
All I can do is tumble
Like a circus acrobat 
In need of a net.

Surely I will stop?
Buffeted by an underwater current
Surely I have to slow down 
Or can I fall for ever?

I open my eyes 
I can’t see anything at this depth
How am I still alive?
I feel the pressure of the water on my chest 
I still seem to be breathing
But how can that be? 

Finally I’m slowing down
Tracing the trail of a feather 
Wafting from side to side 
As it nears the floor. 

I can see the seafloor
Strewn with green
Seaweed, lichen, rocks
My eyes are growing accustomed 
And now 
I see orange 
And red.

I see beautiful fronded seaweeds 
Delicate red urchins 
Swaying in the currents
Mussels 
Clinging to ancient ropes.

There is no light 
Yet cream fingers of coral shine  
Ancient fish lumber in and out of the rocks
Glowing like lanterns.

I feel so, so, so tired 
I want to touch the seabed 
To sink into the green world
Enveloped by the dark
Where I can close my eyes 
And finally stop breathing.
 
In the secret light of the deep 
I see I am shifting in the currents 
Tumbling and stumbling 
Over the rocks
Between the sea debris 
Coming to rest
And wondering
Did he really push me?

Caroline Mohan  
 
Caroline Mohan is based in Ireland and writes sporadically - mostly stories with the occasional poem and mostly in workshops. She is currently enjoying ekphrastic writing and the fun of creating flash fiction. 

**
 
in a land called donnalee
 
under the sea
in a land 
called 
donnalee
where the jellyfish 
float
&
octopussies
emote
i frolic
with my 
marble 
lover
curvy cold
&
deliciously 
salty
 
Donna-Lee Smith
 
Donna-Lee Smith writes from her cabin on a remote lake where hanging out with loons, bats and herons keeps her sane.
 

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