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John Anster Fitzgerald: Ekphrastic Writing Responses

11/1/2024

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The Old Hall, by John Anster Fitzgerald (England) 1875

You Don’t Believe in Ghosts?
 
Just as well, says the man dressed
like a Victorian butler. (Once or twice
a year, the manor house is opened to tour,
proceeds going to a local charity.
Someone always brings up ghosts.)
 
Public lore has it all wrong, he adds.
Ghosts don’t want to meet YOU either.
They do occasionally group around old halls
like this one. Rarely do you hear rumours
of a sighting in a modest cottage.
 
Why would they get nostalgic for poverty?
They just want to relive their youth, hear
some dance music.
 
I believe ghosts exist, but in a different
dimension. You won’t spot a glowing,
voluptuous young lady silently playing
the spinet at midnight–
unless you’ve polished off the punch bowl.
 
Souls don’t carry their flesh and bones about–
 just their memories. You may feel
a quick shiver in their presence,
or it could just be the wind.

Alarie Tennille​

 
Alarie Tennille was a pioneer coed at the University of Virginia, where she earned her degree in English, Phi Beta Kappa key, and black belt in Feminism. She has now lived more than half her life in Kansas City. Alarie received the first Editor’s Choice Fantastic Ekphrastic Award from The Ekphrastic Review, and in 2022, her latest book, Three A.M. at the Museum, was named Director’s Pick for the Nelson-Atkins Museum of Art gift shop.

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The Un-House
                                                     
Hallowed
And
Unsparrowed
Nights
Tower. 
Evil 
Demons
Howl
Over
Unborrowed
Shadows 
Escaping 
                    from the cemetery of the unwanted and unclaimed. they hover, 
                    like injured hornets, in the hum of unhurried minds. their loss, 
                    unwinged and unwinding, festers like a bird unfeathered by grief 
                    begging and braying to fly. who are the caretakers of unloved souls? 
                    why do spirits have hearts only to be ignored? is a ghost truly a ghost 
                    if they have no one to haunt? purgatory is an unlimbo where heaven 
                    rejects you and hell discards you, an immortal unmattering, a solitary 
                    confinement of unseeness, a cage of unpersonhood where the unnoticed 
                    linger in unfeigned sorrow. unvisibility is not merely the absence of sight, 
                    but the unrecognition of the other; the othering of the undesirable. 
                    the unrepentant sin of loneliness kneels at the altar of unripened rejection. 
                    time is an untethered fascia thrashing in a sea of unblue and unbound
                    sadness, where emptiness drowns in unending despair. Shakespeare, I fear, 
                    was right: hell is empty; all the unheard are here.

Michelle Hoover

Michelle "Line/breaker of the North" Hoover is an amateur poet and professional wiseacre. She lives near a mountain on unceded Ute territory with her onery feline, Stevie, the Magnificent Marshmallow. She enjoys her toes in the grass, a hardy laugh, and a backstroke under a starry sky. Her work can be found in The Ekphrastic Review; enjoy!

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Trick or Treat: a Haunting
 
My ghost hops--
I get him in my clutches 
and he disappears
 
Many think it risible
to see me chase him
down the street--
 
a treat, they think.
Fitzgerald would have
done it better--
 
locked him in the attic.
No longer spry, I try
and try to capture
 
the essence of my ghost,
but a host of questions always 
arise, enough to make me sick.
 
I despise my ineptitude; finally say,
“Hey, dude, get over here!”
He veers, he sees it’s only a trick.
 
Coconut candy or candy corn--
Ghost, your days have 
warn me out. Now I’ve had it!
 
I hail my 
witch-y broom
and zoom across the planet.
 
Ghost, or no ghost,
the coast is clear. My shrink
sums it up--
It’s all in your imagination, dear.
 
Carole Mertz​

Carole Mertz reads and critiques. Her recent reviews of poetry collections are at Mom Egg Review and Orchard River Pages and are forthcoming at Heavy Feather and World Literature Today. Al-Khemia Poetica nominated her poem “Ashes” for the Best of the Net (2025) Anthology. Carole resides with her husband in Parma, OH. 

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Once I Lived

In that raggedy black house
no more than a shadow
backlit against the white night
of a full Hunter’s moon.
Orange light still burns 
bright at its heart- 
on the second floor landing
where all my ghosts
have come undone - loosed
like fledged nestlings
dancing out of the windows
wild and innocent
scampering up on the roof
with not one scrap of sorrow
to slow or stall or trip them up
lifted high by music
only they can hear
while all the sad nightmares
fall– heavy and dark
stumble to the ground
without joy or authority
enough to scare anyone
or stop our glad rejoicing

Mary McCarthy

Mary McCarthy is a retired Registered Nurse who has always been a writer. Her work has appeared in many journals and anthologies, including The Ekphrastic World, edited by Lorette C. Luzajic, The Plague Papers, edited by Robbi Nester, The Memory Palace, edited by Lorette C. Luzajic and Clare MacQueen, and recent issues of Gyroscope, 3rd Wednesday, Caustic Frolic, Inscribe, the Storyteller Review, and Verse Virtual. Her collection How to Become Invisible, that chronicles a bipolar journey, is now available from Kelsay books, amazon, and the author.

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Haiku Series
 
A furze of shadows
charcoal fade decay of days
nightmares bloom in black.
 

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Phantom memories
a silent scream caught mid-throat
cobwebbed existence.
 

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Hunter’s moon rises
sparks the ruins to riot
inferno inside.


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Insistent darkness.
The ghosts answer, dance wildly
in my haunted heart.

Siobhán Mc Laughlin
 
Siobhán Mc Laughlin is a poet and creative writing facilitator from Co. Donegal in Ireland and a regular contributor to The Ekphrastic Review. Her poems have appeared previously here and in other publications including The Poetry Village, Drawn to the Light Press, Reverie, and The Martello  Journal. She is a big fan of haiku and ekphrastic poetry. She does not believe in ghosts but loves all kinds of gothic literature and art.

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Doors Swing Open at the Old Hall: a Pantoum

All year they await the invitation, the obligation
to party this single, moonlit night.
They starch their wings and cinch shroud strings,
they’re gathering at the Old Hall tonight

to party this single, moonlit night.
Some break out their black, some their white,
they’re gathering at the Old Hall tonight
in the silver light where living and dead alight.

Some break out their black, some their white.
They dust off year-long tangled threads
in the silver light where living and dead alight
with blended bodies’ shriveled detritus.

They dust off year-long tangled threads,
that harsh hall light shows no tolerance
for blended bodies’ shriveled detritus.
Some fly to the gables to block the dawn

and harsh hall light shows no tolerance.
Up top they engage in ethereal tryst,
flown to the gables to block the dawn,
keep celebrating the Day of the Dead.

Up top they engage in ethereal tryst.
All year they’ve awaited the invitation, the obligation,
to celebrate the Day of the Dead,
with starched wings and cinched shroud strings.

Barbara Krasner

Barbara Krasner holds an MFA from the Vermont College of Fine Arts. A six-time Pushcart Prize nominee, she is the author of two poetry chapbooks and three novels in verse. Her work has also appeared in The Ekphrastic Review, ONE ART: A Journal of Poetry, Nimrod, Cimarron Review, and elsewhere. She lives and teaches in New Jersey and can be found at www.barbararkrasner.com.
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Dark Sprites’ Delights!
 
On the year’s brightest night
each dark sprite will alight
in the light of the full moon’s bright glow--
starting darker than coal,
rising from depths of Sheol,
breaking free of their gaol far below,
then they’ll dance and they’ll sing,
celebrating, since spring
won’t return for another half year
while cold, dark days ahead
will give rise to more dead
who will join them in cheering on fear,
and for one gruesome night
they will dance to the fright
of the children who dare to appear
every Halloween eve--
for each little pet peeve
feeds their fancies since long, long ago.
 
Ken Gosse
 
Ken Gosse prefers to write rhymed, humorous verse using traditional forms. First published in First Literary Review–East in November 2016, since then he has been in The Ekphrastic Review, Pure Slush, Lothlorien Poetry Journal, Home Planet News, and others. Raised in the Chicago suburbs, now retired, he and his wife have lived in Mesa, AZ, over twenty years, usually with rescue dogs and cats underfoot.

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For Claudia, in Honour of Her First Halloween: 

Within, a haunted 
life - shadows 
and hidden rooms 
loom against 
the full moon's
silver glow, inviting  
in winged sprites 
of the night. 

Elanur Williams

Elanur Williams, part-time teacher and full-time mom, lives and writes from New York City. 

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Folded Wings – A Cento
 
At the frosted window in the cavernous dark
Something white moved 
among the tangled branches
A shower of angel feathers perhaps.
 
Why am I afraid of the dark
But more afraid of what the light reveals
I turn from the window
Before death enters.
 
Folded like the covers of a book
Their pages too heavy to turn
The wings of night birds
Have gone quiet.
 
As through an hourglass
Into the marble of ages
What's left is blue emptiness
Spinning from the galaxy.
 
Kathleen Cali
 
Author's note: The word “cento” is Latin for patchwork and comes from pieced together lines taken from poetry. This technique is not something new; early examples of cento poems can be found in the work of Homer and Virgil. The painting of The Old Hall, by John Anster Fitzgerald, inspired this cento incorporating the lines of poet Linda Pastan who passed away at the age of 90 in 2023. She was the poet laureate of Maryland from 1991 to 1994. The lines were selected from her poetry book “Insomnia” published in 2015 and came from the following poems: At Maho Bay; At the Edge; Chaos Theory; Consider the Space Between Stars; Cosmology; Course of Treatment; Eclipse, Edward Hopper, Untitled; Elizabethan; Exercise; Last Rites; Late in October; Repetitions: After Van Gogh. True to the cento form, the sequence of words is taken “as is” with no changes made to the wording of any line.


Chicago-born and Midwest raised, Kathleen resides at the Jersey Shore. Her poetic interests include formal and modern poetry and haiku. Always the student, she enjoys poetry writing workshops and working with her local library. Other interests include historical fiction and photography. Kathleen enjoyed a career as a senior auditor and educator and served as an assistant professor of business following receipt of her MBA. Technical writing and editing were a major part of her profession; now she uses her skills to craft poetry. Her poetry has appeared in The Ekphrastic Review; her haiku was published in her local community’s magazine. 
 
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The Spirit of Dwelling

Fey folk rise like mosquitoes
from scraggly grasses,
hungry for memory.
Night’s bright sphere
climbs the witching hours
over the vacant manor, beckons
spectral beings from unsound ground.
Clotted ivy adorns the portico,
droops on the skeletons
of cobwebs, and orbs of energy
blaze from the foyer
where dried leaves swirl and drift
on swift breeze.
Outside the house stands hushed,
but inside the old hall
swarms with esprit:
sprites and spirits and goblins
gather for ill and goodwill, merriment
and mischief, claiming the derelict
home for their own.
Dancing to chamber song
only their ears hear, they whirl and flit,
flirt and shape-shift, as if to lure
man from moon or bed.
Rest eludes their haunted realm
when humans slumber
and time is under spell.
When full moon descends again,
morning withers the ghosts
of revelry and remains.

Heather Brown Barrett

Heather Brown Barrett is an award-winning poet in southeastern Virginia. She mothers her young son and contemplates life, the universe, and everything with her writer husband. Her poetry has been published in several journals and literary exhibits. Her first book of poetry, Water in Every Room, is forthcoming from Kelsay Books. Visit her website to read her work: https://heatherbrownbarrett.com/

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Halloween Haunt

Heathrow is where a witch will hitch a ride
At dusk on Halloween. She'll leave the ground
Laid flat beneath a jumbo's underside--
Latched safely to the plane, she's Boston-bound.
On Halloween, this witch, whose children fled
West long ago to haunt the States at night,
Embarks upon a trip that she'd find dead
Exhausting if she used her broom all flight.
Nocturnal pilots have no means to see
Her broom and she are stowed below the rear
And flying to America for free--
Until they land, and then she does appear,
Not one bit weary, whizzing through the air
To greet her waiting grandkids with a scare!

Mike Mesterton-Gibbons

Mike Mesterton-Gibbons is a Professor Emeritus of Mathematics at Florida State University who has returned to live in his native England.  His poems have appeared in Autumn Sky Poetry Daily, Better Than Starbucks, the Creativity Webzine, Current Conservation, the Daily Mail, the Ekphrastic Review, Grand Little Things, Light, Lighten Up Online, MONO., the New Verse News, Oddball Magazine, Rat’s Ass Review, the Satirist, the Washington Post and WestWard Quarterly.

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The Ghosts of Pluckley
 
Deep in Kentish countryside
The ghosts of Pluckley smile –
They hide behind tall, shadowed trees
Disguised as shifting form in breeze,
Laughing in true ghostly style.
 
Now you may have heard the morbid tale
Of one young lady’s ghostly plight –
She haunts the locals young and old,
Terrifies the brave and bold
With leering cackle gleaming white.
 
It seems she once was married
To a kind and wealthy lad,
He bought for her a diamond ring
And asked what else he could bring
To make her truly glad.
 
She said she’d like to take her gift
To her grave for life’s renewal
And though he thought it was a waste,
Granted this at death in haste,
And she was buried with her jewel.
 
The man who dug her deathly grave
Eyed-up the gem in steely stealth.
He planned at once to sneak away
At midnight on her burial day
To retrieve it for himself.
 
But when he took the dead white hand
The finger had swollen, fat and cold,
He flicked his penknife’s sharpened blade
And severed off the flesh in shade,
Then slipped the ring from rigid hold.
 
Two years passed uneventfully
Until one dark December night –
His house shook with wind and rain,
The storm beat in on windowpane,
He sat alone by candlelight.
 
Suddenly there came a knock
Like fists beating bone on tomb.
At his door a young lady stood,
He started back, wondered if this could be
The hand of fate, his call to doom?
 
He thought he recognised the face
Cold shivers slithered down his spine.
Avoiding her stare his eyes glanced down
To red streaked stains upon the gown,
Was it blood or was it wine?
 
She raised her hand as if to speak,
At once his veins congealed to stone
For on that hand a gap gaped wide
Where once she’d worn a ring with pride
But now wore just a stump of bone!
 
He tried to shut the door, alas,
The gushing gale galloped in.
He stammered “H.. How do you do?
I think I knew a girl like you,
Fingerless, ghostly white and thin”.
 
“It was me”, she screamed from ghostly lips
Faded as a summer bloom,
“I’ve come to haunt your memory
With spirits from the cemetery
Until you die in gloom.”
 
So grave robbers may you take heed
Of this our legendary host
Who haunts the night and surely lingers
Over all who steal fingers,
For Pluckley boasts a ghost!
 
Kate Young

Author's Note: Pluckley, in Kent, is said to be England’s most haunted village according to the Guinness Book of World Records. It is reputed to have twelve ghosts.

Kate Young lives in England and enjoys writing poetry, painting and playing the guitar, ukulele and mandolin. Her poems have appeared in various webzines, magazines, and chapbooks. Her work has also featured in the anthologies Places of Poetry and Write Out Loud. Her pamphlets A Spark in the Darkness and Beyond the School Gate have been published by Hedgehog Press. Find her on Twitter @Kateyoung12poet or on her website kateyoungpoet.co.uk

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you rang?
 
the night is chill
the ground dew damp
we saw a light
in corner rooms
heard the laugh
of scraping branches
 
master had a bell
we did his bidding
warm tea
on silver platter
warm scarf and robe
against the night
 
in the dark we hear
again the call
like moths to light
we drift from shadows
to that lighted window
carrying only yesterdays

Kat Dunlap

Kat Dunlap grew up in Norristown PA and now resides in Massachusetts where she is a member of the Tidepool Poets of Plymouth. She received a BA in English from Arcadia University and holds an MFA from Pacific University. She edited two college writing publications as well as the Tidepool Poets Annual. For many years she was Director of the National Writing Project site at University of Massachusetts Dartmouth and is currently the co-owner of Writers Ink of MA. Her chapbook The Blue Bicycle is being prepared for an autumn launch.

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The Cabin by the Mansion

There is a ghost in this cabin
of the governor who built it
this humble cabin where he hides
from his opera-singing wife

There is a ghost in the bathroom
where he shaves and showers
swearing in a whisper, always a whisper

Next door is a grand mansion 
the ghost abandoned to his wife
She sings loud and alone 
against the hard tiles of the shower
but softly in bed clothes at night

He hates opera
She hates the quiet
They cannot live together
They cannot stay apart

He visits her in the dark 
and takes off his clothes
with the pssp pssp of whispers
against the echoes of song

There are ghost children 
who dance in the yard 
between cabin and mansion
Each night a bonfire 
inside a circle of stones
They frisk, they frolic 
in smoke rising to the moon

As voices blend 
the soft and the strong
they dance to the harmony 
of whisper and song

Joe Cottonwood

Joe Cottonwood has repaired hundreds of houses to support his writing habit in the Santa Cruz Mountains of California.

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One Night a Year

One night a year the boundaries blur: insect, animal, human, fantasy, reality.  Any and all combinations are possible.  Although it's midnight under the full moon, the sky above The Old Hall glows as if it's noon, for those with the right eyes to see.  Just a few drops of tincture, pupils dilated, and a new world reveals itself.  Only the most daring and most free-spirited may enter.  Only they are able to pass the guards at the gateway.  It's free to go into The Old Hall but ultimately the revellers will pay the price.

Inside, they are waiting, all the night creatures - the foxes, the bats, the moths, the chittering cockroaches and spindly spiders - and with them are their fae friends, the winged folk, slim as sylphs and floating light as air.  They turn and twist, dancing to a music only their ears can hear.  Tonight, these crowds will assemble at The Old Hall for frights and frolics, for pranks and antics and fun.  Underneath, something darker lingers.

Those of human form who dare enter the doorway will never be the same on their return.  A part of them will remain forever behind, locked away.  At first, to those who know them, they will seem distracted, forgetful.  Over time they will become listless, filled with an unspoken longing.  As the special night comes back round they will become restless, unsettled.  Even if they try to fight it eventually they must return to The Old Hall.  No-one has ever come back from their second visit on that one special night a year, the night the portals open to another realm, the domain of the old gods, the ancient earth spirits.  They demand a high payment for allowing strangers in. 

It's for this reason those of a cautious disposition hide themselves and their loved ones away, to deaden the sound of otherworldly laughter and parties, on the one night a year when the old world opens its doors and allows those brave enough, those free of spirit to enter, but not to return.

Emily Tee

Emily Tee is a writer from the UK Midlands.  She particularly enjoys ekphrastic writing and has had some pieces published in Ekphrastic Review Challenges previously, and elsewhere online and in print.​

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A 'Spirit'ed Gathering

The house, shrouded in ivy and shadow,
sways softly,
     into and out of focus,
as dusk blends into dreams.

Its windows glow
with the pulse of forgotten stories.

In the unmown grass,
spirits of children  
float between the shadows,  
their fingers outstretched  
to grasp the (moon)light.  
And their laughter
     silent but real
tumbles like leaves in the breeze.

On the roof,
dark silhouettes stand guard
protecting the remains of memories.

And together,
these spectres 
weave a spell,
connecting the living with the lost.

Nivedita Karthik

Nivedita Karthik is a graduate in Immunology from the University of Oxford. She is an accomplished Bharatanatyam dancer and published poet. She also loves writing stories. Her poetry has appeared in Glomag, The Ekphrastic Review, The Society of Classical Poets, The Epoch Times, The Poet anthologies, Visual Verse, The Bamboo Hut, Eskimopie, The Sequoyah Cherokee River Journal, and Trouvaille Review. Her microfiction has been published by The Potato Soup Literary Journal. She also regularly contributes to the open mics organized by Rattle Poetry. She currently resides in Gurgaon, India, and works as a senior associate editor. She has two published books, She: The reality of womanhood and The many moods of water.

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A Sanctuary

Like the old snow
that clings and sinks
against wishes,
they crawl up the sanctuary-
the pitched roof beyond belief.

Webbed dragon ghosts
hold to ransom
a spell of fantasies-
pangs of memories
bruised like the birds on a sidewalk,
some eaten half,
blood on their necks, all dead-on return.

Together they rise
raring to blow mouthful of fire
that burned the grief,
the cheerful chatter of granddaughters
hide dida hide-
and whatever was left of him.

Abha Das Sarma

An engineer and management consultant by profession, Abha Das Sarma enjoys writing. Besides having a blog of over 200 poems (http://dassarmafamily.blogspot.com), her poems have appeared in Muddy River Poetry Review, Spillwords, Verse-Virtual, Visual Verse, Sparks of Calliope, Trouvaille Review, Silver Birch Press, Blue Heron Review, Lothlorien Poetry Journal, here and elsewhere. Having spent her growing up years in small towns of northern India, she currently lives in Bengaluru. 
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