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Bird Watching Contest: Poetry Finalists

5/11/2021

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At long last, the finalists for the Bird Watching contest have been selected! There will be two posts, one for flash fiction, and one for poetry. Be sure to bookmark them both so you don't miss any.

The bird theme in art is literally as old as the caves, and transcends cultures, media, and time. We are fascinated by birds: they can fly, for one thing, which makes them seem magical. We see them as richly symbolic: freedom, peace, life, death, mystery, war. We see them as messengers.

The Bird Watching ebook contained forty intriguing artworks on the theme of "birds." Participants entered up to five poems or stories inspired by those works. (If you missed the contest, you can still use the curation of bird paintings and other art in your ekphrastic practice. Click here to nab yours.)

Congratulations to our finalists in flash fiction and in poetry. It was incredibly difficult to choose. The Ekphrastic Review seems to attract and inspire a magnificent array of creativity. 

We have attracted a wealth of poetry from the start of the Review. This was no exception. Narrowing down the pool of tremendous poetry was painful for me! I am very grateful that I can pass off the tough job of choosing one from these finalists to Tricia Marcella Cimera.

Tricia is our guest judge for poetry, and her choice will be awarded $100CAD and publication in The Fox Poetry Box, her brainchild installation of poetry in St. Charles, Illinois. Tricia is a widely published poet, a longtime contributor, and her poem, "Second Plum" was nominated by TER for a Best of the Net award. Her recent chapbook is GO SLOW, LEONARD COHEN.

We can't thank you enough, Tricia, for sharing your talent and expertise with us as our poetry judge.

(Find the flash fiction finalists here.)

Poetry Finalists
 
Fate Foreseen, by Portly Bard
Savage, by Laurel Benjamin
The Woman and the Canary, by Jamie Brian
Bird, Temple, Mirror, by Dorothy Burrows
The Myth of Keeping Busy after Loss, by Sandra Fees
Woman with a Bird Cage, by D. Walsh Gilbert
Genyornis Newtoni, by Ronnie Hess
The Eye Always Describes Itself, by Mary B. Moore
Wheat Field with Crows, by Pamela Porter
The Goldfinch Tale, by Alun Robert
Bright Feathers in Moonlight, by Janet Ruth
Young Girl Eating a Bird, by Matthew Sisson
Recurring Nightmare, by Alarie Tennille
February’s Loss, by Rebecca Weigold

Congratulations to all of you!!!

We are grateful to each and every participant. Your ebook purchases have helped us create these cash prize contests where we can pay a winner. We have also been able to run a few social media ads, with the goal of attracting more readers. And as the Review grows and takes more and more time, your purchase and support helps accommodate that reality. Soon we will turn six and we are just getting started! We want to have many more challenges, contests, and content and we are so glad you are part of this wonderful movement.

Join us for our next contest, on the theme of Women Artists. Our guest judge is Alarie Tennille!

Without further adieu, here are the poetry finalists.

​love, Lorette

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Anguish, by August Friedrich Albrecht (Germany) c. 1878

February’s Loss
                    remembering Judah
   
    Your heart stopped and February

collapsed under the strain
    of the news. A chill caw 
pierced my bones:
    There must have been something 
wrong…as though I had
    botched spinning a wool blanket. 
You were not a mistake.
    Not a mishap. Not a malfunction.
Your body was the size of a down feather,
    finespun breath and skin…
is loss any smaller when it is
    something small?
Lullabies flapped and circled,
    alighted at my feet.  I crowed 
your name as though my wails 
    could bring you back, as though
in frantically turning under the 
    bitter ground I could find explanation, 
comfort, but the field only shuddered 
    and gave up its dead
while God watched in silence 
    perched in the skeleton of ash.

Rebecca Weigold

Rebecca Weigold studied writing and theatre at Northern Kentucky University. Her poetry has appeared in BlazeVox, The Ekphrastic Review, Tipton Poetry Journal, The Tishman Review, and other publications. She has been an editor, a model, and an actor. Rebecca loves to travel to see her favorite band, Duran Duran, and has been to several countries. She lives in Kentucky with her computer programmer husband, has two adult sons, and an adorable muted calico named Sox.

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Recurring Nightmare

I’m only six years old the first
time and wake with a bleat. 
Such an odd dream! 
A field of sheep and crows, 
no humans except me.

I know I’m my real self 
because I want to pet
the sleeping lamb. 
Don’t understand it’s dead.

Only three crows then, 
but being alone in a field 
scares me almost as much 
as those dagger beaks 
and piercing stares. 

Perhaps I’m witnessing the lamb 
of God visited by three austere magi
or priests come to give last rites.

Year by year the trinity of crows 
grows to an impressive murder. 
Any sane person would be afraid 
to stand among them now.

The thunder of wings overhead
triggers the memory: I’ve been here 
before, cooling in the snow,
the shaking ewe standing over me.

Panic continues to wake me
before anything happens. Soon I’ll be 
the fierce ewe standing my ground 
like mothers do.

I worry about the night 
I become a crow.

​Alarie Tennille

​Alarie’s latest poetry book, Waking on the Moon, contains many poems first published by The Ekphrastic Review. Please visit her at alariepoet.com. 
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Wheatfield with Crows, by Vincent Van Gogh (Netherlands) 1890

Wheat Field with Crows
                
Light, and the reverse of light. And the sky dark as a breaking 
sea, a storm built one upon another. 

And wheat bending in the wind as though alive, alight 
as if it were a fire set, in search of the one lost. 

Such is the wind’s sadness. A kind of church 
which sanctified colour, the angelic flock of the dark-winged. 

And throughout, a snake of green, a river, as though 
it flowed as veins in the souls of the dispossessed.

Here he stood in his silent world.

He slapped on impasto straight from the tube. 
Crows tossed in as though they were shards broken off 
from the night.

Each thick stroke as if God himself had proclaimed it.

And light, the remaining light an ache inside the brain —  

this the field he blessed and by which he was blessed, freed 
from the cement room in which he was kept,

from which he wrote his letters to Theo: Through the iron-barred
window I see a square field of wheat, and above, the morning 
sun in all its glory...

The heart’s labour. Where this earthly journey begins 
and where it ends.

Your life is no accident. All who come into this world are sent.

Pamela Porter

Pamela Porter is the author of four collections of poetry, two verse novels, and a novel and picture book for children. Her poetry collection, Cathedral, was shortlisted for the Pat Lowther Award, and her poems have won the Vallum Magazine Poem of the Year Award, the Prism International Grand Prize in Poetry, the FreeFall Poetry Prize, and have been shortlisted four times for the CBC literary awards. Her verse novel,The Crazy Man, won the 2005 Governor General’s Award, the TD Canadian Children’s Literature Award, the Canadian Library Association Book of the Year for Children Award, and other accolades. M. Travis Lane has written, “Porter’s poems are pervaded with a sense of grace, of mercy, beauty and benediction.” Pamela lives in North Saanich with her family and a menagerie of rescued horses, dogs, and cats, including a formerly wild mustang.

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The Goldfinch, by Carel Fabritius (Netherlands) 1654

The Goldfinch Tale 
 
fringilla 
carduelis 
passerine 
green 
captured 
finch 
studio 
Delft 
 
perched 
alone 
high 
chained 
fed 
watered 
trilled 
sung 
 
looked 
listened 
smelled 
sensed 
posed 
poised 
static 
erect 
 
Fabritius 
observed 
painted 
lead 
brushed 
scratched 
trompe-l’œil 
 
completed 
unframed 
thunderclap 
killed 
acquired 
lost 
found 
bequeathed 
 
auctioned 
purchased 
Mauritshuis 
Hague 
displayed 
toured 
no longer sings

Alun Robert

Alun Robert is a prolific creator of lyrical free verse. He has achieved success in poetry competitions across the British Isles and North America. His work has been published by many literary magazines, anthologies and webzines in the UK, Ireland, Italy, South Africa, Kenya, USA and Canada. Since 2018, he has been part of The Ekphrastic Review community particularly enjoying the challenges. He is a member of the Federation of Writers Scotland for whom he was a Featured Writer in 2019.
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Earth After the Fall of Man, by Franz Rosel von Rosenhof (Germany) 1690

Savage 
 
Not the Roman Empire but claws
lashing on air, elephants flying to ground
 
vulture finally meeting his match
cities pounded until eyelids bandaged
 
only a lone towhee, orange rump
ringing his approach.
 
They do not like crowds as humans do
this is not the Colosseum.
 
Sorrows gild in a garden
without humans.
 
No heaven or hell, animals climb
an eternal tightrope
 
through atmosphere rungs
to a place without hierarchy
 
without angels, and below
no demons.
 
A wolf’s treasure not raided
even if rampage destroys 
 
flowers. 
We are the trodders
 
humans with our eyes that cling
jaws that turn air
 
we who seduce everything yellow
the original garden overturned.
 
When the animals take over
we then
 
passersby
with no Godly notion
 
just briefcase empty of paper
just savage.

Laurel Benjamin
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Laurel Benjamin holds an MFA from Mills College. She lives in the San Francisco Bay Area. Her work has appeared in Turning a Train of Thought Upside Down: An Anthology of Women's Poetry, California Quarterly, The Midway Review, Mac Queens Quinterly, Wild Roof Journal Poetry and Places, WordFest Anthology, Global Quarantine Museum Pendemics issue, Silver Burch Press, including honorable mention in the Oregon Poetry Association’s Poetry Contest 2017 and 2020, long-listed in Sunspot Literary Journal’s long list, among others. She is affiliated with the Bay Area Women’s Poetry Salon and the Port Townsend Writers. More of her work can be found at https://thebadgerpress.

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​Woman with a Bird Cage, by József Rippl-Rónai (Hungary) 1892

The Woman and the Canary 

I know your heart; I have seen it, the canary calls
to the woman in black from the window’s ledge.
Nothing grows there anymore, not primrose or lily
or even the common daisy. You have strangled your
love with vines, and you do not know how to let it live.

It is the first day of spring. Outside, the world is waking
up from its slumber. Streetlights flutter on and children
stumble into the village square for jump rope games.
In her room, dust swirls in corners that light has not 
reached in years. She wears the dress of mourning.

It has been so long since any voice but her own
has spoken, so long since music filled these walls.
Won’t you stay just a little longer? the woman asks.
I have other suns to bask in; I must be going--
The canary sings, stretching its wings to leave.

Before the canary can finish speaking, the bars
of the cage encircle its body and bind its wings.
The sky lies just beyond the window’s ledge,
but suddenly it is as unreachable as a streak
streak of sunlight at the end of the world.

If you pass under that townhouse window,
you can hear the canary calling still,
its song growing louder and louder with time,
a flightless bird pacing the floor of an iron cage
like a heart straining against the end of its leash. 

Jamie Brian

​Jamie Brian is a pilot and freelance writer living in Pennsylvania. Her work has appeared in The Poeming Pigeon, Ephemeral Elegies, and Auroras and Blossoms Poetry Journal.


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​Woman with a Bird Cage 
 
Canary, you, with your throat opening 
the way the chestnut buds of Goat Willow open into pods of buttermilk, 
come with me. 
 
Your voice bursts wide 
like the yellow-feathered seed capsules of witch hazel. 
And I need you. 
 
I’m closed within 
an elderberry’s purple-black, a tincture of its toxic roots. 
 
Once clothed  
in the mint-ruffled bunting of ruby peonies in April, 
 
now I’m draped 
in woolen thorn, hat-brimmed and pinned without a vine or tendril spilling. 
 
I wear the winter-knotted bark 
of galled and wounded maple branches. Show me your face. 
 
Teach me 
your timbrado melody sung though your golden-wired bars.  
Mallow. Primrose. Clover song. 
 
Warble me. 
Bird me. 
Sky me through the rainclouds. 
 
The ground is loosening, and asparagus shoots have broken through. 
Let me open the cage’s door. 
Peregrine the two of us.

D. Walsh Gilbert
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D. Walsh Gilbert is the author of Ransom (Grayson Books, 2017). A Pushcart nominee, she has also received honors from The Farmington River Literary Arts Center and the Artist for Artists Project at the Hartford Art School.  Her work has most recently appeared in Montana Mouthful, The Ekphrastic Review, Vita Brevis, Third Wednesday, Uppagus, The Purpled Nail, and the anthology, Waking Up to the Earth: Connecticut Poets in a Time of Global Climate Crisis. She serves on the board of the non-profit, Riverwood Poetry Series, and as co-editor of the Connecticut River Review.
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Clairvoyance, by Rene Magritte (Belgium) 1936
Fate Foreseen

For want of warmth it could not beg,
it's merely now infertile egg  --  
a source of life, though still within,
without its moment to begin  --

that faces in what time remains

the fear of fate that feast ordains
for those who would not know the soul
now taken from its brief control

if not for eye and hand and brush
of mind that sees within its hush
the wonder that it might have been
bewinged as life begun again

to keep its species still alive
beyond all it would dare survive.

Portly Bard

Old man.
Ekphrastic fan. 
 
Prefers to craft with sole intent
of verse becoming complement...
...and by such homage being lent...
ideally also compliment.
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Woman With Blue Parrot, by Josef Maria Auchentaller (Austria) by 1949, exact date not known

Bright Feathers in Moonlight

the old priestess
leans on her staff
her back bent, her skin wrinkled
her eyes cloudy now
but her mind as sharp as ever--

as piercing as the claws
that grasped her hand 
the first night the macaw
flew into her room
on a silver shaft of moonlight
the first time
he whispered in her ear
in the voice of a god
she stood naked
before his insistence
before the glimmer
in the velvet words that slid
from his golden throat

he had murmured
of summer places 
far to the south
called her to a lifetime
of service to bright feathers
opulent ceremonies
and stony pyramids
she foreswore forever 
the gentle touch of a man
the chubby clutches of children
and yet--

standing here alone,
a faded cloth woven with 
blue and silver symbols
wrapped around 
her withered breasts
a single tattered 
ultramarine plume
grasped in her gnarled fingers--
if she could go back,
she still would not resist
that velvet voice

Janet Ruth
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​Janet Ruth is a New Mexico ornithologist.  Her writing focuses on connections to the natural world and she thoroughly enjoyed putting a bird in every one of her poems for this challenge.  She has recent poems in Tiny Seed Literary Journal, Sin Fronteras, Spiral Orb, Unlost: Journal of Found Poetry & Art, and anthologies including Moving Images: Poetry Inspired by Film (Before Your Quiet Eyes Publications, 2021), and New Mexico Remembers 9/11 (Artemesia Publishing, 2020).  Her first book, Feathered Dreams: celebrating birds in poems, stories & images (Mercury HeartLink, 2018) was a Finalist for the 2018 NM/AZ Book Awards.   With sister-poets Faith Kaltenbach and Andi Penner, she self-published the chapbook What is the Boiling Point of Clouds? (2019).  https://redstartsandravens.com/janets-poetry/
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Temple of Mysterious Birds, by Bolesław Biegas (Poland) 1928
  
Bird, Temple, Mirror
 
         mute,
         silvery swan,
         ghosting glassy waters,
         lit by bright bulbs illuminating
         ice towers piercing deeply inked skies.
         all around, rainbow trees shimmer rocks
         mimicking clouds drifting upwards. celestial,
         enchanted birds; praising, worshipping silvery
 
swan…
 
                                                      …swan
 
                                                     silvery, worshipping, praising birds; enchanted,
                                                     celestial. upwards, drifting clouds mimicking
                                                     rocks shimmer. trees rainbow. all around,
                                                     skies, inked; deeply piercing ice towers,
                                                     illuminating bulbs. bright by lit
                                                     waters, glassy, ghosting
                                                     swan; silvery,
                                                     mute.

Dorothy Burrows

Based in the United Kingdom, Dorothy Burrows enjoys writing poetry, flash fiction and short plays. She regularly walks over the downland near her home and can often be spotted watching kettles of red kites whistling. This year, her poems have appeared in The Ekphrastic Review, Spelt Magazine, The Alchemy Spoon, Wales Haiku Journal, Failed Haiku, The Poetry Pea and Prune Juice.  She tweets @rambling_dot


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Young Girl Eating a Bird, by Rene Magritte (Belgium) 1927

Young Girl Eating A Bird

Birds descended from dinosaurs, 
one continuous phylogeny, 
Archaeopteryx 
to the American Bald Eagle. 
That ancient predestinator 
never inhabiting 
the Garden of Eden. 

I was a bird watcher, 
but couldn’t help thinking
Thanksgiving, and
four and twenty blackbirds.
“You’ve got to move quickly 
if you want to follow sap-suckers,”
our guide scolds. I’m moving as fast 
as I can. 

And the birds:
Cedar Waxwings,
Bombycilla cedrorum 
all dominance hierarchy
in post-modern pastels. 
Scarlet Tanagers, 
Piranga olivacea,
garish in conflict management. 
Black-caped Chickadees, 
sleeping owls. Work, alcohol, 
and family. Evolutionary pressure. 
All of us struggling to survive.

Matthew Sisson

Matthew Sisson’s poetry has appeared in magazines and journals ranging from the Harvard Review Online, to JAMA The Journal of the American Medical Association. He has been nominated for a Pushcart Prize, and read his work on NPR’s On Point with Tom Ashbrook. His First book, Please, Call Me Moby, was published by the Pecan Grove Press, St. Mary’s University, San Antonio, Texas.
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Bird Effort, by Jackson Pollock (USA) 1946

The Myth of Keeping Busy after Loss
 
A bird is a nibbed instrument
       the sweep of the calligrapher’s pen
a bird, coiffed elegance or buffed refusal
 
each effort a wing-boned strength 
       and muscular métier
an insistence that life is motion--
 
         the only thing you can’t do
                is stop 
         the only thing you can’t do
               is be perfectly still--
 
or you’ll plummet, crumble to ash.
 
Such. An. 
Exquisite. 
Lie.
A bird is 
a brushstroke
of blue 
or red 
or grief
gathered 
to your 
stilling beat 
poured out 
in splattered 
song.

Sandra Fees

Sandra Fees is the author of The Temporary Vase of Hands (Finishing Line Press, 2017), served a term as Berks County, Pennsylvania, Poet Laureate (2016-2018), and is a 2020 Pushcart Prize nominee. Her work has appeared in The Comstock Review, Chiron Review, Sky Island Journal, and The Ekphrastic Review, among others. She holds a master’s degree from Syracuse University's Creative Writing Program and Master of Divinity and Doctor of Ministry degrees from Lancaster Theological Seminary. She resides in South Central Pennsylvania and enjoys long walks near water and Sivananda yoga.

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The Eye Always Describes Itself
                               
Are those birds or entrails?
They coil and veer into or grow
 
inside each other: sinuous necks, 
beaked and billed heads, the round
 
press of bodies. The thick black outlines 
don’t forestall the slippage: 
 
they insist. A duck head 
near the coil’s centre smiles, its eye
 
Groucho Marx’s, the brow, a check mark,
and below its bill, another bill opens, a black line 
 
between the halves: a serpent’s tongue
under the humor. An ivory-crested waterbird’s
 
neck greens into a another sinuous 
neck below, its beak points down.  
 
Nearby, a gray shape, almost a small
hawk’s, points for eyes, lodges
 
in a larger bird. Everything mothers another
or has eaten it.  The palette is brilliant, jays’
 
and bunting’s blues, vireo greens, 
rooster reds, a milkier jade green 
 
and the eider-neck teal
above and winding around. 
 
My writer friend Rachael 
doesn’t like birds.  I never asked why. 
 
Pollock’s attitude is obscure: The small jade 
duck near the bottom may float
 
under an upside down seagull,
neck and eye red, bill 
 
slightly open. Is he dead or merely red?
An orange wing nests among
 
the mélange, the edges scalloped.
I see a curled swan’s neck too.  
 
Step back, and behold!
The whole coil is a bird head or mask:
 
two eyes, the main beak, and the gull 
caught in it: The palette, kill, 
 
eat, and preen, head a swarm 
of guts, beak a mechanism
 
for tearing and singing: it’s
nothing like me, nothing at all.

Mary B. Moore

Mary B. Moore’s books include three full-length collections and several chapbooks: Dear If, is due out from Orison Books, late 2021; Amanda and the Man Soul (Emrys Chapbook Prize, 2017), Flicker (Dogfish Head Book Prize, 2016), Eating the Light (Sable Books Chapbook Contest 2016), and The Book Of Snow (Cleveland State University, 1997). She has also received several awards for poems in Terrain, Nelle, Nimrod, and Asheville Poetry Review. Recent work appears in Poetry, The Gettysburg Review, Prairie Schooner, 32 Poems, The Georgia Review, The Birmingham Poetry Review, The Nasty Women Poets Anthology, Fire & Rain-Ecopoetry of California, and others. 

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Genyornis Birds, rock painting (Australia) c. 40000 to 3000 B.C date not certain

Genyornis Newtoni

O, biggest of big birds, three times the size of an emu, 500 pounds
of muscle, bone: Early hunters may have tracked you

too hard across the Australian landscape, poached your eggs buried
in sand. Or, was it the earth went dry, a kind of early warming?

You were the Pleistocene’s passenger pigeon, dead as a dodo,
giant Moa, great Auk, Carolina parakeet, elephant bird.

Like police detectives contemplating the body, we ask,
What happened? Or, Who did this to you? Not what medium

was used: Charcoal, clay, shell, amalgam of powders,
not whether the painter was extinction’s blind culprit.

Isn’t the story beyond the telling? To observe is to be responsible.
Giant ibis, New Caledonian owlet-nightjar, birds in our backyards.

Ronnie Hess

Ronnie Hess is an essayist and poet, the author of five poetry chapbooks (including O Is for Owl) and two culinary travel guides on France and Portugal (Ginkgo Press). She birdwatches from a perch in Madison, WI.
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