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Gustave Courbet: Ekphrastic Responses

5/19/2023

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La Grotte de la Loue, by Gustave Courbet (France) 1864

Dear Ekphrastic Writers and Readers;

It was a great honour to receive and read all of the poems and fiction written for the Courbet Challenge. I have been enamoured of ekphrastic writing for several years and love the prompts presented from paintings and sculpture. Such a rich pool of poetic fodder! I find it fascinating how different the interpretations can be on a single specimen of art. Such talented writers! I have narrowed the entries down to this collection, for their special qualities and unique approaches. I would like to thank Lorette C. Luzajic, editor of The Ekphrastic Review for the opportunity to be a guest editor, and for her continuing efforts in curating such an interesting and exciting poetry journal.

Warm Regards,
Julie A. Dickson


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Cave Painting

I was not accustomed to dark
I made my eye into a pencil
piercing into the lead
I saw bent figures
among the stalagmites
their voices calling through evolution
my brothers and sisters
I reached into the hole
to pick them out
but my fingers were not enough
paint they said
paint the past
our imaginations are wild horses
on empty plains
paint the future
I told them
we are waiting for you.

Marc Brimble

Marc Brimble lives in Spain and teaches English. When he's not doing this, he likes drinking tea and looking at the sky.

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La Grotte de la Loue

What do you see, Gustave,
as you peer into the depths?
Do you perceive a flicker
the glimmer of light moving there
a hint of rippling reflected on walls
or do you stare farther down and in
looking beyond what is visible
into the dark abyss, not just here
but the inner world of yourself,
contemplating deeper within
mining your personal hinterland
busy with white noise and black light
allowing your own mind's colours
to flood your soul and the canvas?

Emily Tee

Emily Tee writes poetry and flash fiction.  She's had pieces published in The Ekphrastic Review and for its challenges, and elsewhere online, and in print in some publications by Dreich, in Poetry Scotland and in several poetry anthologies. She lives in the UK.

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The Roar of the Waterfall

A cascade, leaping from rock to rock, a waterfall broken by a thousand imponderables, a spectacle stirring emotions, touching all the senses. The Loue springs from a dark cave dug into the rocks during millions of years by its relentless intent. Courbet painted it 14 times, investigating the secrets of its terrible beauty.

Perhaps he was in thrall to the Vouivre, the dragon that resides in the cave. Half woman, half snake, her forehead is adorned with an enormous precious stone which she hides on the shore, in the moss, or under a stone, before drinking or bathing. Thief, try your luck, but don’t get caught. Her revenge will be terrible...

Beauty’s mystery
Source of nature’s power
Woman

Rose Mary Boehm

Rose Mary Boehm is a German-born British national living and writing in Lima, Peru, and author of two novels as well as seven poetry collections. Her poetry has been published widely in mostly US poetry reviews (online and print). She was twice nominated for a Pushcart. Her latest: Do Oceans Have Underwater Borders? (Kelsay Books July 2022), Whistling in the Dark (Cyberwit July 2022), and Saudade (December 2022) are available on Amazon. https://www.rose-mary-boehm-poet.com/

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The Stream That Is You

I draw down     into the cave 
of my heart          into the dark 
welcoming world        of water and rock

of soft memories       hard knowledge 
of knowing         this long    hallowed channel 
of want     regret       and quiet repose

I find my reflection     where riffles 
toss to the edge      travel slow currents 
of yearning       slip into sorrow 

murmur of love 
you are a moment      long 
in its lingering      you are forever

flow silent within me
meander      arrive in each corner 
each crevice        you….

Ursula Shepherd

Ursula Shepherd has spent a lifetime exploring the world, celebrating all those alien life forms (plants, animals, even algae and bacteria) found right here on planet Earth, and finding joy in the beauty and power of words. She has written a book Nature Notes: A Companion to the Seasons, published by Fulcrum, occasional essays, and has poems in Unbroken, Grim and Gilded, Minnow and upcoming in Writing in a Woman’s Voice.

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Dark Dreaming

She’d always loved to watch the birds
as they swooped and swerved
in the sky above her.
She could see them now
from the mouth of the cave,
black birds,
rooks or ravens,
corvids as dark as the cave.

They were invisible as she went deeper
so she could only see them
when she dreamt.

And she wondered 
if  dreams would be enough
to sustain her
in the dark.

She wondered 
if they would be enough for her
when the black water rose.
and the river flowed in.

Lynn White

Lynn White lives in north Wales. Her work is influenced by issues of social justice and events, places and people she has known or imagined. She is especially interested in exploring the boundaries of dream, fantasy and reality. She was shortlisted in the Theatre Cloud 'War Poetry for Today' competition and has been nominated for a Pushcart Prize, Best of the Net and a Rhysling Award. Her poetry has appeared in many publications including: Consequence Magazine, Firewords, Vagabond Press, Gyroscope Review and So It Goes Journal. Find Lynn at: https://lynnwhitepoetry.blogspot.com and https://www.facebook.com///www.facebook.com/Lynn-White-Poetry-1603675983213077/

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boatman

I harken to the lapping
of the water against
the rocks
the boat
the pole
where I hear
in the voice of the cliff
all the whispered echoes
of bygone lemures
lamenting
weeping
pleading
as if I’m some Orpheus
come to bring them out
back into the world above
instead of the boatman
completing
a journey
allotted
to other days
and nights
erased
and faded
like fingerprints
in the clay of our lives
shaped
fired
glazed
then broken
then cast out
onto the sand
lining the beaches
where the young
are still
standing
-- waiting

Mark A. Fisher

Mark A. Fisher is a writer, poet, and playwright living in Tehachapi, CA.  His poetry has appeared in: Reliquiae, Silver Blade, Eccentric Orbits, and many other places. He was nominated for a Pushcart Prize for his poem “papyrus” in 2016. His first chapbook, drifter, is available from Amazon. His poem “there are fossils” (originally published in Silver Blade) came in second in the 2020 Dwarf Stars Speculative Poetry Competition. His plays have appeared on California stages in Pine Mountain Club, Tehachapi, Bakersfield, and Hayward. He has also won cooking ribbons at the Kern County Fair.

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Trapped by a Nervous Dawn

Trapped by a nervous dawn
the dead stone of the night knocks at the buried sky
gone underground,
retreated dramatically.
Shadows applaud its growing momentum
and awkward passage.
 
The rocks add burden
while generously avoiding breaking:
think of a long, inflexible, rough rope -
and pull.
It hangs in the center like a dark arm
and a scream,
blocking the view,
tilting the water,
and I lean upward to answer
that weary moan of poison.
 
I try to take two huge steps back
and forth,
and extend my elbows in front of the creature
to avoid it:
what a beautiful awakening I am.

Angelo 'NGE' Colella

Angelo 'NGE' Colella lives in Italy, where he writes poetry and prose in Italian and English, makes analog collages, asemic writings and DADA objects.

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Perspective 
 
cavernous limestone 
I feel insignificant
among the massive 

Elaine Sorrentino
 
Elaine Sorrentino, communications director by day, poet by night, has been published in Minerva Rising, Willawaw Journal, Glass: A Journal of Poetry, The Ekphrastic Review, Writing in a Women’s Voice, Global Poemic, ONE ART: a journal of poetry, Agape Review, Haiku Universe, Sparks of Calliope, Muddy River Poetry Review, Panoply, Etched Onyx Magazine, and at wildamorris.blogspot.com.  She was featured on a poetry podcast at Onyx Publications. 

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Reflections on the Grotto of Loue, My Home

away from home.
Whatever I give it,
ripples back to me in echoes.
These pink-grey limestone rocks overhead
are the roof over my days.
I cannot but hug the darkness, within,
its chiaroscuro-depths, its everyday-familiarity.
The soft chant of the white waters, without,
are the whispers of hope and clarity.
Standing on the banks of movement,
this brown glassy calm
is what I observe,
when I try to read the waters
of life at the margins.
It is here that I fish
not just for food and survival.
It is here that I fish
for the meaning of that survival
with the sharp spear of stillness.

Preeth Ganapathy

Preeth Ganapathy is a software engineer turned civil servant from Bengaluru, India. Her works have been published in several magazines such as The Ekphrastic Review, Soul-Lit, The Sunlight Press, Atlas+Alice, Ink, Sweat and Tears, Mothers Always Write, Tiger Moth Review and elsewhere. Her microchaps A Single Moment and Purple have been published by Origami Poems Project. She is also a two-time winner of Wilda Morris's Poetry Challenge.

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La Grotte de la Loue, 1864, Gustave Courbet
 
The artist with his pallet of gunmetal and sorrel and his cavern-sized
vision of the bateau as it slides among grey-brown boulders,
of a white shirt and the position of an arm upward toward whatever
light reflects, could he be thinking of entreaty or surrender or simply of painting
the Loue, a man in a skiff.
 
The peasant in the river, with his culottes rolled, gripping his pole
could he have his attention on more than his skiff, more than the dark
grotto ahead, the trout and greyling in the spume where
the river is born again and again.
 
The painter with his pallet, and his grey and brown notion,
the fisherman with his flat skiff and his empty belly, neither of them
have a promise of fish or inspiration, although they both have desire.
The painter waits on the bank with his inventions and oils.
The fisherman gazes into the gloom toward a stir in the water.
 
Never mind beseeching the cavern for a fish dinner, a finished painting.
Never mind praying to the cave. Never mind worshiping the river.
Never mind paying homage to the darkness.
There are no answered prayers in stones of the Loue.

Wendy Taylor Carlisle

Wendy Taylor Carlisle is the author of four books and five chapbooks and is the 2020 winner of the Phillip H. McMath Poetry Prize. A chapbook-length selection of her work appears in Wild Muse: Ozarks Nature Poetry, (Cornerpost Press, 2022) and a new edition of her book, Reading Berryman to the Dog, (Belle Point Press. 2023)  is out now. Find her work at www.wendytaylorcarlisle.com,

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Fisherman
 
no stars…
his blunt spear jabs
at the river’s flow
 
a lone fish…
today’s rush of brightness
swallowed
 
night’s barrier…
his yawn
of emptiness
 
hollow…
the source of his world
murmuring
 
dankness…
in his ears echoes
of lost voices
 
his lament…
moss-draped shadows 
only he can see
 
a ghostly stream…
giant limestone rocks 
trickling hard tears
 
his slight figure…
a twisted stalagmite 
about to break

Dorothy Burrows

Based in the UK, Dorothy Burrows enjoys writing poems, short plays and flash fiction. Her poems have been published by various journals including The Ekphrastic Review. She is still enthralled by the sight of stalactites and stalagmites. 

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Almost
 
too small to notice
the fisherman stands at the lip
of the cavern’s stony mouth
casting his line
into the swallowing dark.
The river rises
from the throat of the abyss
to sluice around his ankles
cold  and blind
as the eye of God.
Unlike night
with its salted stars
and moon that wanes
and returns 
regular as a slow pulse,
this is no innocent darkness
he stands against
but one so absolute
its creatures live  
like  fallen angels 
without hope 
or memory of light
 
Mary McCarthy
 
Mary McCarthy is a retired Registered Nurse who has always been a writer. Her work has appeared in many journals and anthologies, including The Ekphrastic World, edited by Lorette C. Luzajic, The Plague Papers, edited by Robbi Nester, and recent issues of Gyroscope, 3rd Wednesday, Caustic Frolic, the Blue Heron Review, and Verse Virtual. Her collection How to Become Invisible will come out from Kelsay early next year.

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Let Me Show You
                         
the grandeur beyond this
domed dark grotto, 
says, Courbet by The Loue.
 
Your vision is the protector
and the predator,
says, Courbet.  Imagine––
 
the little man at its gate is me
stirring and spearing the light of
the dark, my fish.
 
Leave the rest to my paints and brushes 
to enliven the boulders’ might
bestowed on us by the maker.
 
Look at the hues of jade 
and ivory worn by water sculpted
by storms.  Remember–– the bouncy foam
 
only performs for the rocks wearing 
lacey skirts and wind stoles.
They were there long before we got here.
 
I am simply offering you a peek in
the cavern’s womb,
the way each day and night do
 
when you and I drift into dreams of
the intangible our sun brings to life, nonstop,
with its circadian strokes.
 
Varsha Saraiya-Shah

Author of VOICES, a poetry chapbook by Finishing Line Press, Varsha’s work appears in journals such as Borderlands, Cha, Convergence, Echoes of the Cordillera, The Ekphrastic Review, Mutabilis Press, Penguin Random House-A Global Anthology, Pippa Ran UK book-Converse: Contemporary English Poetry by Indians, Skylark Publications- UK, Soundings East, UT Press, etc. and has featured on Public Radio and a multi-language/century dance program: “Poetry in Motion.” Poetry lets her practice the art of living.
 
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Cavern

Somewhere, the earth yawned.
Cracked a smile
a little too deep.
A mouth watering
for an anticipated meal,
it opened slowly,
dripping with the slow indulgence 
of sustained appetite.
The hunger grew,
whole rooms blossomed with calcite.
Stalactite fangs pronged from above,
stalagmite cavities shone in the hollow.
The maw was a wide swallow
in the ground of Earth-face,
eyes closed to the sunlight,
the inside seeping in unhurried time.

Diane Funston

Diane Funston lives in Marysville, California, in the Sacramento Valley. Diane has been published in various journals including California Quarterly, Synkronicity, San Diego Poetry Annual, Whirlwind, F(r)iction, Tule Review, and Lake Effect Magazine, among others.  She has been the Poet-in-Residence for Yuba-Sutter Arts and Culture for two years and ran a monthly Zoom event called “Poetry Square” featuring poets from all over. Diane has a brand-new chapbook, her first, entitled Over The Falls from Foothills Publishing. 

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Natural History
 
                    Time goes slower in the sea
                    and faster in the mountains.
                    Physics has taken over
                    where poetry left off.

                    Lynn Davidson, “Pearls”
 
Gaze into the mouth of the cave.
Beneath that yawning chasm, there is no doubt that time
folds. No doubt that time        bends deep,
 
waves and curls like an echo, rippling
under earth
and ancient water.
 
The history of the world is not set in stone,
but it can be found there – if you know
how to look. Think
 
cartography, in four dimensions. Coordinate,
distance, direction, and
limestone. A colossus of karst and strata, bone included
 
like salt grains in a Jurassic river, currents deep
and crystalized. These horizons run rugged, all pink and blue and gray,
overflowing with coral, mollusk and ammonoid,
 
sponge and algae. A tapestry of deposition. Little pearls
show the seasoned observer
where hunger is formed – little fossils where the world begins
 
to grow teeth. Tide meets pulse,
and teaches blood to beat
its vital rhythm.
 
Forget Plato and his shadows. Outside of the cave,
people cleave themselves from the past
headfirst, carving away the years until all that’s left
 
are skeletons. Hollow husks. One can play with them
like marionettes, a caricature in historical dress – but the truth remains
buried under six feet of earth, dust,
 
and decay. Inside the cave, though, the limestone colossus
breathes. Benthic silence thrums
with energy. Everything that has ever lived
 
and will ever live
swims through the stone – the walls, the bedrock,
coming closer and closer to the surface
 
until the distance between your hand
and the depths of Hades
is weathered down
 
to less
than a millimeter
of skin.

Kimberly Hall

Kimberly Hall (she/her) is a queer and neuro-divergent poet and writer. She received her master's degree in behavioral science from the University of Houston-Clear Lake. Her poetry and prose can be found in online publications such as First Flight, Sappho's Torque, and Equinox, as well as in several ekphrastic poetry anthologies and an upcoming anthology from Mutabilis Press. She still gets the idiomatic butterflies whenever anyone mentions these things where she can hear them.

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Crab Eaters

Our wandering mind slinks off
until your words layer thoughts
and feelings beneath our limestone
skin: therapy with a palette knife.

Today we summon night terrors
in a sunbeam---go spearfishing
for secrets---watch them scrape
and squirm going down the wet-
over-dry shadows of your throat.

Mariel Herbert

Mariel Herbert likes to write short ekphrastic poems, including haiku and senryu. Her most recent two were published in Failed Haiku. She can sometimes be found walking near the Pacific Ocean or online at marielherbert.wordpress.com.

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