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Gustave Guillaumet: Ekphrastic Writing Responses

3/8/2024

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The Sahara, by Gustave Guillaumet (France) 1867

Strange Comfort 

I have been leafing through a catalogue from the Musee d’Orsay while you sit reading near my bed. The book lies heavy on my outstretched lap, and I will need you or someone to take it from me when a nurse appears with my evening meds.  Sadly I am no longer able to lift even the smallest brush to try and reproduce the golden bowl of Guillaumet’s sky, the grey, dun colour of the camel’s skeleton or the vast desolate Sahara.  

​This painting somehow calls to me.  I am surprised at the elegant way the bones of the camel’s long legs, once flesh and blood, are outstretched, not splayed.  It is as if the animal felt death approaching and chose how to sink down onto the hot dry sand and accept its fate.  The tiny caravan in the distance, on the horizon line, offers no solace, no story.  

“Sahara,” I say to you.  “The title of this painting.”  You lay aside your book and rise from your chair to stand by my bed, to see what I see in the painting.  But your hand on my hand cannot hide your sadness, your dismay that this vision of death gives me comfort, something you can no longer offer, and I must forgive. 

Pamela Painter

Pamela Painter is the award-winning author of five story collections, and her stories have appeared in numerous journals and anthologies.   She has received three Pushcart Prizes and her work has been staged by Word Theatre in London, New York, and LA.   Her story, “Doors,” is being made into a short film. 

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Emptiness

The emptiness of grief
through the eyes of a girl 
who is dreadfully lonely inside her mind 
better hope for heartful grief
when I can write these words
and release the wretched soul seizing
in the lonely desert

My mind forms this scene
to make sense of the swirls of tides
pouring over my tired body

Go to the place of loneliness
and hold up the form
give it peace real love 
and there be life and colour once again
pour out my ungrateful yelling
onto the world
to let the good life
fill the empty desert in my mind 

Heather Sarabia​

Heather Sarabia is a writer and visual artist living in Madison, WI, who is on the autism spectrum.  Despite being nonverbal, she is a prolific writer, typing out poetry and prose with assistance.  Her writing centers on her lived experience and hope for justice. Through her work, she consistently strives to gain freedom from the systems of dependence that leave her feeling trapped. ​

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A Postcard from the Museum Gift Shop
 
You would talk about pigment sources, about brush manufacture, the relative value of this painting on this or that market. You know those things about art. How it is done. How much it costs. What is popular now, and what was popular in the 19th century.

“This frame,” you’d say, stopping at a painting by a French artist. “Worth two grand alone, easy.”

What would I say to you? Nothing. 

Or, I would say the painting isn’t about the camel. It’s about the desert. It’s about how a thing will die when there is nothing to sustain it. How a thing will die, and no other thing will come to pick clean its bones because nothing, not even a vulture, can live where there is nothing.

I would look at you, if you were here in this gallery with me, surrounded by oil paints and canvas and gilt frames, with tears in my eyes, with more water in my eyes than in the whole Sahara, the whole painting of the dead camel, the desiccating camel from which all the material goods it was carrying have been stripped.

“Maybe it was a wild camel,” you’d say, your tone bored, your words flat and uninterested. Humouring me.

No wild camel would let itself be caught like that, at the forefront of a scene, already almost a part of the sand. It had to have been a domesticated camel. Not a wild thing.

Soon it will be half-buried, angles softened by drift, and I feel the sting of the sand that will scour the bones, that will dry the rough-hair hide to cracked leather. 

There’s a postcard of that painting here in the museum gift shop.

I imagine sending the dead camel in the Sahara through the U.S. mail. The mail sorters would spare barely a glance, or maybe one would snatch the dead camel from the sorting machine just for a moment, show it to a co-worker. “Weird thing to send someone,” one might say to the other.

The postal carrier, the one who delivers your mail to the out-of-fashion brass box next to your front door, would look at it, I’m certain, and would read the note on the back.

“Wish you were here.”

Epiphany Ferrell

Epiphany Ferrell lives on the edge of the Shawnee National Forest in Southern Illinois. Her stories appear in more than 80 journals and anthologies, including Bending Genres, Ghost Parachute, Best Microfiction, and The Disappointed Housewife. She is a two-time Pushcart nominee, and a Prime Number Magazine Flash Fiction Prize recipient.

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You Never Made It To The Oasis     
 
You never made it to the oasis.

It was there, but you didn't believe it. You didn't think you could have it all in one place: fresh water, cool shade from the sun, all the things you lack now.

Instead, you carried all you thought you needed, but that's gone, too; it's just you, reduced to the colours around you. To the hot, dry air. To the hot, dry land. You can't live on these things, but they will live on you. The air will leech all the moisture from your skin, muscles, organs, and bones. The land will emulsify and reduce you to particles of itself.

You thought the oasis was an illusion.

But you are here in all that is disappearing.

Rina Palumbo

Rina Palumbo (she/her) is working on a novel and two nonfiction long-form writing projects alongside short fiction, creative nonfiction,  and prose poetry. Her work appears in The Hopkins Review, Ghost Parachute, Milk Candy, Bending Genres, Anti-Heroin Chic, Identity Theory, Stonecoast Review, et al. You can find her work at https://rinapalumbowriter.com/

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Concentrate Evaded

A mirage - in the past preferred -
romanticised, idealised,
when Gustave, grand, but simple shows
infinity in solitude.

See on those waves, both beached, far reach -
set crests, dips, statuesque through span -
horizon hint of caravan,
its passing, mirage as that past?

Below mist mellow yellow sky,
monotony, bleached bands of sand,
old skeleton, cold, frozen tones,
sole camel carcass in the waste.

Alone, soul-search, did Guillaumet
seek desolate to feel the real,
as isolated wilderness
revealed erased, evaded truth?

Stretched parchment skin, yet sinew tent,
parched bones to crumble into grains,
for space, time aeons, concentrate,
deserted places, Sahara.

Stephen Kingsnorth

Stephen Kingsnorth (Cambridge M.A., English & Religious Studies), retired to Wales, UK, from ministry in the Methodist Church due to Parkinson’s Disease, has had pieces curated and published by on-line poetry sites, printed journals and anthologies, including The Ekphrastic Review.  He has, like so many, been nominated for the Pushcart Prize and Best of the Net.  His blog is at https://poetrykingsnorth.wordpress.com

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On Guillaumet’s Sahara​

The world must have begun like this. “Without form and void,” we are told. In the beginning, life was not just missing—it was rejected, as the camel is rejected: You do not belong here. The beauty of emptiness must remain uncorrupted.

Any life here is ephemeral. The distant caravan passes through the landscape, does not dwell in it, cannot survive on it. The camel did not. Others, too, if they do not feel urgency, will lie rejected here. Not decaying, never decaying, for few microbes avail to consume and digest in this aridness. The camel will remain desiccated instead, a warning as Ozymandias was warned: Only distance is eternal, life is not.

The world must have begun like this, with only dawn to remove the chill of night, only dusk to grant its restoration. Void, and without form.

Ron Wetherington

Ron Wetherington is a retired professor of anthropology living in Dallas, Texas. After more than half a century of university teaching and research, he has settled on replacing scientific journals with literary magazines as an outlet for his writing efforts. He has a novel, Kiva, and numerous short fiction pieces in this second career. He also enjoys writing creative non-fiction. Among his published pieces are three in this Review.

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Sahara Trade Route
 
The caravan slowly
travels south
past the carcass
of a camel lost
on a previous journey,
travels through 
the desert under 
102 degree 
temperatures
in search 
of the next oasis 
when a northeast wind
horizontally obliterates 
their forward movement
with sandstorm particles.
In the early afternoon
the vagabonds pitch
tents, wait out intense
midday heat before 
the herd continues
a dangerous trek
until well after dark
when the Sahara
turns cold. On this
forty-second day
of the trip they
approach an oasis
where lemon
and fig trees flourish
where nomads exchange
salt for gold, copper,
and animal hides.

Jim Brosnan

Dr. Jim Brosnan is the author of Long Distance Driving (2024) and Nameless Roads (2019). His poems have appeared in the Aurorean (US), Crossways Literary Magazine (Ireland), Eunoia Review (Singapore), Nine Muses (Wales,) Scarlet Leaf Review (Canada), Strand (India), The Madrigal (Ireland), The Wild Word (Germany) and Voices of the Poppies (United Kingdom). He holds the rank of full professor at Johnson & Wales University in Providence, RI. Jim has also won numerous awards from the National Federation of Poetry Societies.

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​You Desert
 
Someone once told me that water is friendly.
Free
              Our patron saint
 
This place is barren of that elixir
Arid one says
              Did God punish you?
 
Did you eat of the poisoned apple? Oh Wait, no apples here, did you eat the poison cactus fruit?
Did you take God’s name in vain?
Did you forget green
Or never know?
 
Oh wait,
perhaps desert lives in the slow lane, morphing slowly, slowly, so slowly we cannot discern, except perhaps at night when the owl swoops
                 You are home 
 
Animals crawl across your scaly self 
Hide from the sun, thick skinned
Plants get tough 
Proud to be resilient, canny
They make do        
                     Are they your friends? 
 
Or is it just the law of the jungle, I mean the desert
Harsh world, harsh truths
 
Preparing us for water wars, to catch our notice. It takes patience to watch a world slowly emaciate itself of water, thin skinned, short sighted. We humans plod on in our juicy bodies
                        Lie all is well, it is not.
 
Listen, it is slowly ebbing away, hear it 
Listen to the desert, it will tell you how to hide in plain sight
How to hunker down in dryness, solitude.
How to disappear when danger comes.
                         Pay attention.

Doris Brigitte Ash

Doris Brigitte Ash: "I was born in Munich Germany in 1943 during World War II. My mother tells of bomb shelters with my baby carriage. We escaped to the country, suffered diphtheria in 1945, emigrated to the US in 1948 to Brooklyn, then to upstate New York. I went to Cornell and then to the University of California Berkeley, received a PhD, taught at UC Santa Cruz for 20 years, now retired. I have been a poet and artist most of my life, often combining them in ekphrastic poetry. I write very personal poems, as my history lives within me."

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The Horizon Walks Down

an emptiness
that gets emptier.
I see pink magnolia
in white grains of sand
devoid of revolt.
A mirage or a miracle,
swarming quiet
parsing the unknown
into freedom
of sorts.

Abha Das Sarma

An engineer and management consultant by profession, Abha Das Sarma enjoys writing. Besides having a blog of over 200 poems (http://dassarmafamily.blogspot.com), her poems have appeared in Muddy River Poetry Review, Spillwords, Verse-Virtual, Visual Verse, Sparks of Calliope, Trouvaille Review, Silver Birch Press, Blue Heron Review, here and elsewhere. Having spent her growing up years in small towns of northern India, she currently lives in Bengaluru. 

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​​Tough:  A Sijo Sequence

I.
She died hard, and she died proud, with nary a complaint. Tough.
Death’s freedom returned her to this Earth that she had worked tirelessly.
Subtly stubborn and quiet, she would have wanted it this way.

II.
I, too, was - am - supposed to be strong. Steadfast. Unbreakable. Tough.
My disapproved tears would have been met with a silent, shunning glare.
She would have said to walk off my sobs and just get over it.  

III.
We were never supposed to get lost - to survive a land this tough - 
to lose honest dreams to lying nightmares in this rotting abyss,
goodness lost to this brimstone- and fireless hell we so wrongly chose.

IV.
She never got any credit. She simply soldiered on. Tough.
Lacking the accolades of fine breeding, she went unrecognized, 
her courage, her strength, her hard work, and her kindness all unfeted.

V.
All our intergenerational traumas made us women tough.
My own nightmares join the elite company of age old ones
passed mother to daughter on repeat on ragged x-chromosomes.

VI.
We women die hard, and we die stubbornly, fighting and tough.
Unrepentant for our sins, we become unwilling martyrs,
surviving, thriving, and even tougher than we thought we were.

Rose Menyon Heflin

Rose Menyon Heflin is a poet, writer, and visual artist living in Madison, Wisconsin, although she was born and raised in rural, southern Kentucky. She has had over 200 poems published in outlets spanning five continents, and her poetry has won multiple awards. One of her poems was choreographed and performed by a dance troupe, and she had an ekphrastic creative nonfiction piece featured in the Chazen Museum of Art’s Companion Species exhibit. While primarily a poet, she has also published memoir and flash fiction pieces. Among other venues, her poetry has appeared in Deep South Magazine, The Ekphrastic Review, Salamander Ink Magazine, San Antonio Review, and Xinachtli Journal (Journal X). 

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​Desert Scene

(High Desert, Palmdale California)

Joshua trees have that power
to be perceived  as you need them to be perceived.
Today as most days, they trod on dry ground  --
grist scattered with brush;  the mountains' stone temple 
in the distance. Gawkily, they stretch and stalk the high
desert wind. Their bulge of leaves maintaining 
whatever moisture the night spawned. One tree
lies fallen in the field,  a carcass burdened
with straw and crows on its back, struck
by lightning or something else. We just stare 
and step away, following the others   
under a summer  sun, heading toward
 the carved heights where  cool  water 
veils the rock;  and dark  pines like perfume burners  
honour the hawk, the hush of the living.

​Wendy Howe

Wendy Howe is an English teacher and free lance writer who lives in Southern California. Her poetry reflects her interest in myth, diverse landscapes, women in conflict and ancient cultures. Over the years, she has been published in an assortment of journals both on-line and in print. Among them: Strange Horizons, Liminality, Coffin Bell,  Eternal Haunted Summer , The Poetry Salzburg Review, The Interpreter's House, Stirring A literary Collection, The Orchards Journal, The Copperfield Review and Sun Dial Magazine.  Her most recent work has appeared in  Indelible Magazine and Songs of  Eretz.

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Seeing The Sahara by Gustave Guillaumet

We saw it on our final trip to Paris, 
you at my side as I mansplained meaning. 
If you look hard enough, I said, it's clear 
it means that nothing really matters. 
The sun is indifferent, the desert 
is indifferent, and the bones that were a 
camel don't care. They spend their days dead, 
awaiting their erasure by sands of time. 
He’s painted the future of everything;
listen to the silence you can almost hear…
But you urged me to contemplate the light: 
cool yellow wide across limitless sky, 
borderless dusk that could just as well be dawn. 
I can see it now. Where the end was born.

Paul McDonald 

Paul McDonald taught literature and creative writing at the University of Wolverhampton for twenty five years, before taking early retirement in 2019. He is the author of 20 books to date, which includes fiction, poetry and scholarship. His most recent poetry collection is 60 Poems (Greenwich Exchange Press, 2023).

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Sahara Wadi
 
O, wind in the dunes
old wells, the aquifers
 
mud houses
 
“Kel Tagelmust,” the veiled people
Sahrawi, Berber for desert
along the river bed
date trees, olive trees, figs
humped camels, the zebu
the wattle trees used 
for fodder and firewood
sheep and the goats.
O, everything flattens
 
a field of bitter apple
reed grass
locust swarms.

Ilona Martonfi

Ilona Martonfi is a mother, an activist, an educator, literary curator, poet and an editor. Born in Budapest, Hungary, she has also lived in Austria and Germany. Martonfi writes in seven chapbooks, journals across North America and abroad. Recipient of the Quebec Writers’ Federation 2010 Community Award. Martonfi lives in Montreal, Canada. The Tempest, Inanna Publications, 2022, is her fifth poetry book.

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I Can’t Blame You

There was no reason for you to stay. I was already gone, lost in the great Sahara of my heart. Acres of sand repeating the same denial, grain by grain, from here to the world’s blunt end, a place without mercy, that teases the eyes with visions of golden domes and towers rising into the blind white sky. Where the sun’s an anvil, each day hammered flat as sheets of metal too hot to touch, where no bird flies and no green seed dares unfold on the incinerating air.

You did not see me there, bleak as the line of the horizon dividing burning sand from burning sky.

You could not see through my eyes-still there but fading fast into the once green world, gone flat as a cardboard sign advertising hopes I can’t believe in. Here where my heart is a desert no one can cross, where even camels collapse like empty sacks, nothing more than leather and bones, a warning only the desperate can ignore.

In this great nothing you will never enter with voice or hand or eye, where I’ve gone too far to catch, where the wind shifts sand to fill my footprints, erasing my faintest trace too fast for anyone to follow. Where no one will find me. Where I too am nothing,  leather and bones, drying in the sun.

Mary McCarthy

Mary McCarthy is a retired Registered Nurse who has always been a writer. Her work has appeared in many journals and anthologies, including The Ekphrastic World, edited by Lorette C. Luzajic, The Plague Papers, edited by Robbi Nester, and recent issues of Gyroscope, 3rd Wednesday, Caustic Frolic, Inscribe, and Verse Virtual. Her collection How to Become Invisible is now available from Kelsay books.

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​Deserted

1
Does the sky rise to meet us?

It scatters our questions
into lamentations of unshed tears.

It seeps into our blood
roots growing like branches
between our bones.

2
The barren land holds onto our days.

We keep knocking on its door
but the only answer is dust.

The dust turns us into ghosts.
We try to find the one that is Death--
to claim it, clarify it, give it meaning.

3
Lost ground settles on the horizon.

It exposes all we wish to be but are not,
all that leaves us stranded, isolated, alone.

Without a deity, what defines us?
Belief comes and goes like anger,
like despair, like all those tiny glimmers of hope.

Kerfe Roig

A resident of New York City, Kerfe Roig enjoys transforming words and images into something new.  Follow her explorations on her blogs, https://methodtwomadness.wordpress.com/  (which she does with her friend Nina), and https://kblog.blog/.

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Deserted
 
The new guy, most had called him, not bothering to learn the names that changed like a long-running show with an ever-changing cast and crew. At some point, someone noticed he was missing, a break in the chorus line, easily replaced. 
 
He lay there, not feeling the hot sand anymore--bleeding, blending, becoming a part of the desert. Downed by a scorpion, was it? He couldn’t remember anymore. He was floating on waterless waves in the sea of time. Drifting as night devoured the day. 
 
Were his eyes open? He was certain he saw the lights of the city, a radiant dance across the distant expanse of arid dunes. They murmur to him with the voices of forgotten loves, “come!”
 

Stars glow in the eyes of the fennec fox. He yelps in excitement to his burrow mates, calling each by name.

Merril D. Smith

Merril D. Smith lives in southern New Jersey. Her poetry has been published in Black Bough Poetry, Acropolis, Anti-Heroin Chic, The Storms, Fevers of the Mind, Humana Obscura, and Sidhe Press, among other places. Her full-length collection, River Ghosts (Nightingale & Sparrow Press) was a Black Bough Press featured book.

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The Sahara, Gustave Guillaumet (1867)

A skeleton is all a rotting camel
leaves, just as the blazing sunlight sets --
without a trace of preying birds or mammals  --
its death was due, perhaps, to unpaid debts
in drifts of sand no human feet now trammel.
 
Orientalists created fictions
of the desert, luring and exotic,
whose sand contained some secretive encryptions,
as dreams made tantalizingly erotic.
embraced by ancient Romans, Greeks, Egyptians.
 
The desert is where we meet God alone --
the flat Sahara filled with nothingness --
while the wind like us prolongs a moan.
Far back, across this treeless wilderness
a caravan heads off to the unknown.
 
It moves between two worlds in blinding gusts,
across terrain that hides our history --
buried implements of war now left to rust,
as the sky reveals its mystery:
the arc of stars whose dust became our dust.
 
Royal Rhodes
 
Royal Rhodes is a retired educator who remembers various visits to the deserts in New Mexico, Texas, and the Negev. His poems have appeared in: The Ekphrastic Review, Ekstasis Poetry, Chained Muse, Snakeskin Poetry, The Montreal Review, and elsewhere.
 
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And You Knew Me

I put city life behind me, turn my back on spires and “turf” lines. I follow my gut, those pressing urges whose origin grows from unformed substance. I never look up. I never look back. I set my face like flint and strike my own path in the desert. I know the names of every tumbleweed, every burnt stalk, every sunless shadow. I can lie down now, dream of what’s dew.

mid-day shimmers
in waves of shady green
floating . . . floating
 
Todd Sukany 
 
Todd Sukany <[email protected]>, a Pushcart nominee, lives in Pleasant Hope, Missouri, with his wife of over forty years. His work appears in Ancient Paths, Cantos: A Literary and Arts Journal, Cave Region Review, The Christian Century, Intégrité: A Faith and Learning Journal, and The Ekphrastic Review. He and Raymond Kirk have co-authored books of poetry, Book of Mirrors (1st through 5th). Sukany’s latest book, Frisco Trail and Tales, chronicles a decade of running experiences. A native of Michigan, Sukany stays busy running, playing guitar, doting on six grandchildren, and caring for three rescued dogs and four rescued cats.
 
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visiting an exhibition in the rain
 
rainbow hues of parked cars
do not relieve the grey
infusion of constant drizzle
even museum corridors
have absorbed the mood
captured by the artist
 
what pigment is this
a muddle of avocado and coffee                    
colors the stark Saharan landscape
the desert brushed in varying tones
stretches to an indeterminant sky 
where even the sun is muted with dust
 
should I pity the mummified camel
reduced to leather and bones
neck stretched out as though
reaching for one more step
one more galactic spectacle 
of moon and stars                                           
 
was it the icy night that felled him
or the nearness of stars
that rendered him breathless
outside dusk had chased the rain
perhaps the night sky would blaze
with that starlit brilliance
 
Kat Dunlap
 
Kat Dunlap grew up Norristown, PA and now resides in Massachusetts where she is a member of the Tidepool Poets of Plymouth. She received a BA in English from Arcadia University and holds an MFA from Pacific University. She edited two college writing publications as well as the Tidepool Poets Annual. For many years she was Director of the National Writing Project site at University of Massachusetts Dartmouth and is currently the co-owner of Writers Ink of MA. Her chapbook The Blue Bicycle is being prepared for a spring launch.
 
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