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Jacek Malczewski: Ekphrastic Writing Responses

2/9/2024

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In the Clouds, by Jacek Malczewski (Poland) c. 1894

An Ordinary Day
                             

                                            "You've seen the refugees going nowhere,
                                             you've heard the executioner singing joyfully...

                                             Praise the mutilated world
                                             and the gray feather a thrush lost
                                             and the gentle light that strays and vanishes
                                             and returns."
                                                       Try To Praise The Mutilated World,
                                                                                     Adam Zagajewski
                                              
                                       
It was an ordinary day:      I saw the angel rise wearing handcuffs,
the black wall of forest trees     trimmed of individual identity

obstructing movement in the background.     I have dreamed
of fields where foliage wears a crown of saffron;     seasons

when an ideology of earth     clings like lost ideas to  a wind-
buffeted angel -- like children, words are     spirits of new life,

the harvest of the past.     So I believe I have held newborns
and watched the light illuminate a window;     read poems

by a professor, born in the Ukraine     where now war
mutilates the people, toppling cities;     crippling everything

but hope...     How slim the stalks are, this past we've harvested,
praying gun fire would grow silent; praying     we can hold on

to one another, tangled, as we are     in the leitmotif of clouds
where nothing guides the bare feet of an angel
                                                                                      toward the breath of dawn
                                                                                                      above the ground.

Laurie Newendorp

Laurie Newendorp's book, When Dreams Were Poems, explores the relationship between art and words.  Honoured multiple times by The Ekphrastic Challenge, she studied poetry in The University of Houston's creative writing program at a time when Adam Zagajewski's poem, "Try To Praise The Mutilated World," appeared between black covers as the last page in the New Yorker issued after 911.

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Spinning Dust-Bowl Dreams

The clouds 
Create havoc in their wake — splitting atoms in the sky
prospecting gilded wheat extracted from an emulsion of grime
spinning dust-bowl dreams from fool’s gold delusions

If you spin it, they will come, quoth the silence to the lamb
whistling through lips greedy with I, spewing silence
evading her starving ears fighting for just a nugget

Foraging among a carrion of broken fences— 
shackled in a saucer of milk and honey intentions, she watches
as these demons in angel’s clothing tumble from the sky

Dethroned, denied their place in this dystopian debacle
tempting fate as hellions grapple with her thirst for I
fearless spectres eradicating sovereignty in this whirlwind 

And the clouds

in the distance, witnessing the carnage spinning from its loins
with eyes wide shut — rain icy tears on the stark meadow 
this boulevard of broken dreams, exposed and bowing to

the ominous reality of stark days to come.

Ann Marie Steele

Ann Marie Steele, who resides in Charlotte, NC, America, is a writer who dabs mainly in free verse and prose poetry. She holds a BS in Journalism (News-Editorial), and an MA in Secondary English Education. Ann Marie pens pieces about love and loss, and what she observes and experiences. The loss of her youngest son, Brandon, has influenced much of her writing. Her works have been described as “resiliently defiant.” Ann Marie has been published in The Ekphrastic Review with her pieces, “Every Lilly Donned with Grief” and “I Dare You, Pretty Please,” and in Exist Otherwise with her piece, “Scintillating Symbiotic Sea.” 

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A Day's Work

A leg broken and healed out-of-shape
betrays its farmhand, the wheat-worker,
my grandfather. One day he will leave
to mine coal in the Alleghenies and die

of something else entirely. But today
he is more than a man: his the rough hand
that feels for God when leisure won't, 
who knows angels dirty with a day's work.

Kathryn Borobia

Katy Borobia is a recent graduate of Hillsdale College. Her poems and prose have been published by Ekstasis, Glass Mountain, and several others.

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Birth of Spring

Demeter spins and seeds scatter, burrow, and are sown. She stalks the rows, protecting the tiny shoots bursting through, pushing further away from Hades’ black below. She haunts and hunts the snacking crows as her daughter, Persephone, snakes her way up through the silt and soil with loam in her pores and worms in her mouth. 

Persephone’s hand breaches the land, and Demeter, feet planted and toes channelling the strength of roots, grunts and pants to heave her free. Hades spits out the girl and her grubs, and Demeter’s sweat and tears rain joy on the grains to the music of Persephone’s vernal scream.  

Bayveen O'Connell

Bayveen O'Connell is an Irish writer whose words have been nominated for Best Microfiction, Best of the Net, and the Pushcart Prize. She loves art, history, folklore, and myth.

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The Moments of Tomorrow

Bound we run, slightly unhinged through
the buoyant clouds of golden dust
 
Haunted by the shadows of the past
blending with the nature that surrounds

Embraced in the dense canopy meeting the sky
sheltered from the torrent of time
 
Disappearing footprints wear our names
tow-coloured meadow, a soothing sanctuary
 
Emanating endurance of our weary shape
indestructible perseverance of our inner spirit
 
Ohh, how we mourn the loss of Humanity;
the enslaved homeland left behind
 
Our minds, dust clouds, floating forward tentatively
towards the moments of tomorrow

Andrea Damic

Andrea Damic, born in Sarajevo, Bosnia & Herzegovina, resides in Sydney, Australia. She’s an amateur photographer and author of poetry and prose. She writes at night when everyone is asleep; when she lacks words to express herself, she uses photography to speak for her.  Her poems can be found in The Ekphrastic Review, the other side of hope, Lothlorien Poetry Journal, Door Is A Jar Magazine, Roi Fainéant Press, The Piker Press, Mad Swirl and elsewhere. She spends many an hour fiddling around with her website: https://damicandrea.wordpress.com.

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Breakfast Cereal

Oh to break fast with wing-milled wheat
And the milk of angels aged !
Fresh from the field
Where cherubs are chained
And Polonia’s sunny yield preserved.
Alas, all we consume is twisted and free
In the shade of trees askew,
For we deserve not she who
We fasten with our fresh air,
No, we break fast with milky shadow,
sucked from above her greying hair.

Sophiya Sian

Sophiya Sian is a UK-based creative and undergraduate student reading Comparative Literature. She recently wrote the screenplay Pigeon-Livered, an independent short film set to be released early this year. Catch her over on Instagram @thinkinfin. ​

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When Souls Can’t Rest

She soars on gossamer wings into a silent sky, 
safe from the deafening thunder of war below, 
her fragile wrists shackled behind her back, 
still bearing the battle scars of hatred.

Who will save the children left behind in despair?
Who will feed their shriveling bodies and nurse
their open wounds? The children beg her to stay 
but their voices fade from afar as she focuses

on the trees beyond that continue to thrive 
while children die. Clouds thicken and gray 
as her wings slip into the mist. Cries of anguish
still linger in the breeze and her tears spill, too.

No one wins when souls can’t rest.

Shelly Blankman

Shelly Blankman lives in Columbia, Maryland with her husband of 43 years. They have two sons, Richard and Joshua, who live in New York and Texas, respectively. They have filled their empty nest with four rescue cats and a dog. Richard and Joshua surprised Shelly with the publication of her first book of poetry, Pumpkinhead. Her poems have appeared in The Ekphrastic Review, Verse-Virtual, and Muddy River Poetry Review, and Open Door Magazine, among others.

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No Turning Back

In the far distance they saw 
something moving. Heat shimmer 
down the road, a mirage growing. 
Not water, pooled on black tarmac,
but something golden, alien – angelic. 
Rising silvery in a tumbling cloud,
as once the prophesising angels
must have seemed. But here in the bread
basket, while rye and wheat
and barley baked in the summer sun,
something else was loosed. 
 
Dust bowl America, overworked
earth. Seventeen-year cicada hum
groaning into life. Or on the Great Steppe,
dry air, winter cold as dusty death. 
August breezes blasted from a broken car muffler
stripped the topsoil away, flung it skyward,
as if to declare, here are my children, 
here, their inheritance, which, like your progress,
are promises reduced to just so much hot air. 
Only the poltergeist is left, 
alone in its abject fury. 

Jo Mazelis

Novelist, poet, photographer, essayist and short story writer, Jo Mazelis grew up in Swansea, later living in Aberystwyth and then London for over 14 years before returning to her hometown. Her novel Significance was awarded the Jerwood Fiction Uncovered Prize 2015. Her first collection of short stories Diving Girls was shortlisted for both Wales Book of the Year and Commonwealth Best First Book. Her book Circle Games was long-listed for Wales Book of the Year. Her third collection of stories Ritual, 1969 was long-listed for the Edge Hill Prize and shortlisted for Wales Book of the Year in 2017. Blister and Other Stories was shortlisted for the Rubery Award in 2023.  

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The Northern Line

No one remembers getting on the train. Amnesiac, we’ve always been traveling, always riding. Our folks paid our fare, but we only remember how July heat rose from the fields and women cooked all day, red-faced, bickering, envying their menfolk’s outdoor life. But that prison’s drawn by a tall black line fencing their reach, the wide blue yonder just a torment.

Aunts and uncles fall by the wayside. Bits and pieces abide, moving along with us, outside our train window. Now, my mother joins them, the smartest of thirteen kids, born with both hands tied behind her back. No. I did not agree to this. The train’s moving too fast, I say, as we fly through Rapid City, our people trailing behind us.

Sarah Holloway
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Sarah Holloway lives with her husband and lots of books in Savannah, GA. She’s a recovering tax accountant. Her recent work has appeared in SmokeLong Quarterly's blog, Roi Fainéant, Emerge Literary Journal, Cowboy Jamboree and SugarSugarSalt. She’s on Twitter/X @Sarah31405.

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The Incident

Those kids were asking for it, who told them to joyride the tractor like that─ slamming on the brakes for a bird whiffling through the air like some corkscrew opening dreams that they (like everyone) had of flying, knowing they would surely fly someday but never thinking it would be that day, the dust cloud rising, harsh braking lifting them out of their seats, tire tracks furrowing the field where grass won’t grow, not to this day, especially not on the spot where, if you view it from a distance, it looks for all the world like angel wings opening.

Cheryl Snell's books include several poetry collections and the novels of her Bombay Trilogy. Her most recent writing has appeared in Does It Have Pockets? Switch, Gone Lawn, Your Impossible Voice, Pure Slush, and other journals. A classical pianist, she lives in Maryland with her husband, a mathematical engineer.

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Fields of Witness
 
Wheat fields of Zaręby Kościelne loom  
brittle, no longer incubated in Brok River bed soil,
no longer trampled by naked boys racing to splash
in their Sunday swim, no longer rented 
to their parents to eke their week’s zlotys.
 
My shoes crunch on crispy stalks,
stomp on my grandfather’s memory clouds,
slipping between blades of long-gone windmills. 
Dew insists life once existed here, before
Russian occupation, Soviet
takeover, Nazi invasion.
 
Shrouded ancestors, you omnipresent
sentinels, why did you not emerge 
from struggling vegetation, breathe
your warnings? They whisper:
We lost our voices in troop dust.
 
Barbara Krasner

Barbara Krasner visited her grandparents’ Polish village in 2008. She holds an MFA from the Vermont College of Fine Arts and a PhD in Holocaust & Genocide Studies from Gratz College. Her poetry has appeared or is forthcoming in Nimrod International, Paterson Literary Review, Typehouse, Cimarron Review, Rust + Moth, and other journals. She lives and teaches in New Jersey.

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From the Cloud of Dust

From earth to earth, and dust to dust,
is this a ghoul, ghost of the swirl
from yellow field, sand sundried track
where sky, trees, field, path stratified?
With speckled cloud, long pine line thinned,
weed growth of green ’gainst meadow gold,
though wheel tread rutting parallel,
set lines are drawn for wight erupt.

So are they shades or one in whirl,
these dancers of one move unfurled,
dust devil’s grit confusing eye
or phantoms raised as spectral wraith? 
No will-o’-wisp, phosphine oxide,
or lantern swamp to misguide fools,
this dry five, more, evolving shape
writhes wrist chains, grim skull, digit reach.

Polonia, emerging sons,
from shackled hands of Poland’s past,
can Motherland be symbolised;
or demon mad, Poludnica?
A tromp l’oeil, imagined mind,
a marriage, surreal, well-earthed,
out on a limb, unmeasured step,
that breath, wind, spirit blows as will.

Stephen Kingsnorth

Stephen Kingsnorth (Cambridge M.A., English & Religious Studies), retired to Wales, UK, from ministry in the Methodist Church due to Parkinson’s Disease, has had pieces curated and published by on-line poetry sites, printed journals and anthologies, including The Ekphrastic Review.  His blog is at https://poetrykingsnorth.wordpress.com

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Apparition 
 
Did you descend from the sky 
or ascend from the earth, 
 
your ethereal form hovers
over brush and scrub. 
 
You could be struggling to escape
the shackles of motherhood  
 
or liberating yourself from a homeland  
steeped in tsarist autocracy 

searching for a more vibrant, 
independent palette of landscape. 

Elaine Sorrentino
 
Elaine Sorrentino, communications director by day, poet by night, has been published in Minerva Rising, Willawaw Journal, Glass: A Journal of Poetry, The Ekphrastic Review, Writing in a Women’s Voice, Global Poemic, ONE ART: a journal of poetry, Agape Review, Haiku Universe, Sparks of Calliope, Muddy River Poetry Review, Panoply, Etched Onyx Magazine, and at wildamorris.blogspot.com.  ​

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​I Don’t Know, Angels Maybe

I’m trying on the vestments of angels,
I’m trying to be good. Remember when you asked me
what word do I misspell? It’s definitely. Somewhere
inside me, I want the base to be define
instead of finite and it fucks me up every time.

Finite leads to infinity and then the idea
that I could go on living for who knows
how long and that’s a downer even though 
I’m not ready to die yet. I still need more clarification
regarding dogs. Most of the stories about them

are sad stories unless they are happy stories, but I’m still
crying by the end either way while a great dark mouth
is eating all the trees and I keep thinking of that time 
your car died on the roadside
in what we thought of then as rural Maine

and I imagined a kind of fog rolling in from the fields 
to envelop you while I waited for a call back. 
Unacceptable! A hole like that
is either a portal or it’s vastly empty. I promised myself
I would never stop trying, but I’m so tired.

I want my old clothes back, the jeans
that you used to borrow. I love you so much, though 
I don’t think I’ve ever said that out loud, in that way.
Let the damned pendulum keep swinging. I’m easily 
as culpable as my own mother was but in completely different ways. 

God! I tried, I swear it. It was just the wrong day,
I was wearing the wrong face, but now things are moving
at an incurable rate, bridges are connecting people
who never thought they’d meet. It’s beautiful, a golden hour. 
Maybe we could all be better than we ever dreamed of being.

Crystal Karlberg

Crystal Karlberg is a Library Assistant at her local public library. Her poems have recently appeared or are forthcoming in: The Threepenny Review; The Penn Review; Beloit Poetry Journal.

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Defiance

Tumbling through time,
a mist of loam enshrines
—a glimpse--
of an angel’s untimely 
demise.

An apparition of Atropos,
cutting her threads shy,
so when plucked, 
she might choose 
to die. 

Sworn never to be the 
unwilling bride
of some dreadful lord, 
unwedded, 
her dress torn
where faithful sisters
stitched wings inside.

In defiance, the goddess 
throws herself down,
on a bed of nightshade 
sewed into the gown.
Loosed, the spool
begins to unravel, 
until uncoiled she’s freed,
becoming immortal.

Jory Como

Jory Como is an emerging poet and songwriter from northern Minnesota. He holds bachelor’s degrees in Nursing and Organizational Behavior. Several of his short holiday stories have been published in local newspapers. As a veteran, Jory hopes to use his work and the art of poetry to help others realize healing from emotional and physical trauma. He lives on a hobby farm with his spouse and children.

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In the Gold Fields
 
The gold. It hurts your eyes. And you see things that are not there. Are possibly not there. Were there, you said. You told me of a flurry, white and gold with arms or wings. You told me this in the evening, you had been waiting all day to tell me and admitted that you worried I would laugh. Or worse, deny. It was beautiful, you said. Three or four beings, maybe more or less it was hard to tell with the way the breeze whipped cloth, feathers, hair, bodies. I refrained from saying what I thought. That you were tired, that a wind stirred up the golden field into a twister, that you wanted it to be something marvelous. The fields are a vivid gold I said. They are, you said, and that’s what brought them here. They were attracted to the gold. They whirled in it, like bees dancing to gather pollen. I tried to ask, did they see you, did they acknowledge you, but your face was aglow as if lit by the fields, your eyes were shining, you looked so enthralled I decided not to drag reality into your dream. But perhaps I should have. The next day you went to the fields. I saw from the porch as you stepped into the gold and you laughed and cried out in wonder, and I saw the moment you left me. 

Amy Jones Sedivy

Amy Jones Sedivy retired this year and is happy to sit on the front porch with the dog, and read novels, short stories, and politics. She has been published in several online and print literary magazines. 

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To Jacek Malczewski Regarding In the Clouds

So well in dust you conjured theme
where clouds and trees in tandem seem
to hold the souls in captive state
who suffer heat of demon's hate

for yearning's thirst to labour free
and self determine destiny
tradition long has held as trust
bequeathed by generations thrust

where love would flicker into flame
becoming home and hearth and name  --
a blaze that would sustain and heal
and forge a will of tempered steel

assured forever to survive
as spirit in which they would thrive.

Portly Bard

Portly Bard: Prefers to craft with sole intent...
of verse becoming complement...
...and by such homage being lent...
ideally also compliment.

Ekphrastic joy comes not from praise
for words but from returning gaze
far more aware of fortune art
becomes to eyes that fathom heart.

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