Agnes Was Here I saw Jay last week. It was late and the streets surrounding the intersection of the BMT with the Church Avenue bus were deserted. He stood humpbacked, sheltering from the snow under the overhang of the candy store that graced the corner. The distance between us had grown to a dozen years and I thought to walk away, but he stood blue and shivering--fumbling with a cigarette butt he could no longer light. We huddled over the subway vent until the worst of the shakes passed. He was years ahead of his time, in his artfully torn jeans and army surplus jacket. Who could have predicted a generation would mimic his look, if not his misery? But he stole every show-- strutting the stage with his vintage Sunburst-- back when we were the next big thing, before the booze the smack the nightly fights. Back when we were family. Before Agnes left him for the drummer-- the one we all called Einstein. That graceless night, I offered to find him shelter-- though he knew I hoped he’d say no, then slipped a few dollars in his friendless hand and boarded the empty bus home. Steve Deutsch Steve Deutsch, a semi-retired practitioner of the fluid mechanics of mechanical hearts and heart valves, lives with his wife Karen--a visual artist, in State College, PA. Steve writes poetry, short fiction and the blog: [email protected]. His most recent publications have been inEclectica Magazine, The Ekphrastic Review, The Drabble, New Verse News, Silver Birch Press, Misfit Magazine and One-sentence poems. As an adult, Steve had the good fortune to sit in on two poetry classes taught by first class poets and teachers. He has been writing poetry ever since.
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11/18/2017 03:02:33 pm
Steve, this is a wrenching tale you tell. I love how you used September's Rattle Ekphrastic prompt to springboard you into this fleshed out story. Thanks for sharing it.
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11/18/2017 11:30:52 pm
Thanks. Great prompt for me. Somehow it brought some separate histories together.
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