Child
After a feverish night, she brings the quieted babe to the edge of the wood. Her narrow path is well trodden, soil worn smooth by the passing of many feet. The air is crisp, the scent of green life and gray decay mingle in the cool air wafting from the dark forest. She cradles the baby in her lap, her farm hands dark against the luminescent child, her daughters’ fair skin blending with the ashen tones of the swaddling cloth. O babe, world of wonder and beauty, sweet scented perfection. In a gesture so subtle, so distinct, she leans back at the appearance of a slight Slavic figure, hooded, who now bends tenderly to the child as if to breathe in her still scent. One hand digs into the folds of her baby’s blanket while the other falls away. Elizabeth Burnside This poem was written as part of the surprise ekphrastic Halloween challenge. Elizabeth Burnside's poems have been been published in the I-70 Review, Fourth River, Plum Tree Tavern and The Ekphrastic Review, among other places. She found this painting one of the most haunting of the Halloween Challenge.
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Mary McCarthy
11/19/2017 12:10:53 pm
Chilling without saying directly who this visitor is, what has happened, and we know for or,sure it isn't good. The unspoken makes the effect even,stronger!!
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4/16/2018 02:59:38 pm
Thanks Mary - I'm just seeing your comment now. I wasn't totally happy with this poem, and so didn't go back to it once it came out. I just love your work as seen here in The Ekphrastic Review - and appreciate the response.
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