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Gray, by Sara Palmer

6/10/2023

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Conveying a Child's Coffin, by Albert Edelfelt (Finland) 1879

Gray

When the phone rang at seven a.m.,
leaden light crept beneath our
blackout shades in eerie streaks,
and overnight, the damp Seattle air 
had left its clammy imprint on our skin.
 
Rob was dead.
Found on his kitchen floor,
a needle in his arm, an IV bag 
stolen from the hospital hanging
above his young body.
 
His sister came, and we scattered 
Rob’s ashes in the Sound, the San Juan
Islands silent witnesses to our grim
work on that dreary day.
 
No rowing for us, no coffin;
just a ferry, and an urn.
But look how the painter’s pinched 
faces mirror our own. Parents,
grandmother, sister (younger 
than Rob’s), each wearing identical
flat, distanced frowns as if, 
though they are all in the same boat,
each is victim to his own private
tragedy, her own disorienting loss.
 
They stare stupefied at the bleak
horizon or gaze into the black
waters below, as if their pain 
could fly away with the gulls or
sink down into the depths, done.
 
See the forethought in their hands,
how the body copes long after the mind
goes numb. Look how father grips
the oars and rows, mother cradles
her bundle of provisions (even in grief
her hands do the work of living), 
how grandmother clutches
a bible which does not console, 
while sister gently holds 
a yellow flower to place 
atop the baby’s coffin.
 
It was the same for us. Our bodies
conveyed us to the task: hands drove
the car out of the city, turned
the pages of Rob’s diary (eyes absorbed 
the fathomless sadness 
hidden there), arms held 
each other tight, fingers scooped 
out black ashes from the box, scattered 
them, as if we had done all this before. 
 
I couldn’t speak of it for weeks. My throat
clamped down on my words.
Rob was gone, his sister back east.
The damp and gray plodded on.
 
Some days I’d walk down to 
Pikes Place Market and watch
how the rugged mountains hovered
white over water, the remains 
of my wretchedness softening
under their primordial spell. Soon
I could say it: 
Rob is dead. I could convey it
out into gray skies, and over steely waters
as if the pain of my farewell could
fly to the farthest shores, gone.
​
Sara Palmer   

Sara Palmer is a retired psychologist and an active writer, reader, hiker, knitter, and volunteer with literary and health nonprofits.   Her poems have appeared in Yellow Arrow Journal, Pen in Hand, and Poetry is Life: Writing with Yellow Arrow. She lives in Baltimore, MD.
1 Comment
Alarie Tennille link
6/10/2023 02:05:56 am

What beautiful writing, Sarah. Due to a computer "upgrade," I can no longer click the like button, so I have be vested in a poem all the more to make a comment. Of course a psychologist would have insights like this, but making them sing takes double the talent. My favorite part was
"See the forethought in their hands,
how the body copes long after the mind
goes numb."

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