Richard Diebenkorn’s Ocean Park #79
[The spectator] wants to join the canvas, not in order to consume it aesthically, but in order to produce it in his turn (to “re-produce” it), to try his hand at a making whose nakedness and clumsiness afford him an incredible (and quite misleading) illusion of facility. –Roland Barthes Lines drawn alongside lines as if under lines, lines drawn straight up and down and across, lines angular, lines drawn helter-skelter, lines defining fields in shades of blue like an ocean (but not an ocean), in a band of yellow and gold like a sunset (but not a sunset). Lean in here, viewer, where the way out first seems be through windows or doors, before they turn into ghostly shapes of ships or just some fog on the glass. everyone can see the way it’s been built up layer upon layer who knows what to call it? it is not futility first sullied canvas he was hoping to paint out the lingering stains as gesture piled on gesture marks what time does The eye continually wanders as in a labyrinth, false clues at every turn; first a long time certain of success, certain you’ve read it, and then right into a wall, the only passage being under; but the game’s been changed. We know certainly it is not the picture of farm plots or a surrealist beach, but we cannot decipher it, unlock whatever hidden meaning might be there. It might just mean what non-meaning itself means, the presence of absence; and it represents the unrepresented. I first picked out that single surface, a canvas drawn and painted on flat before my open eyes no illusions of depth too many details to reckon them up in words no sooner noticed than forgot, the flood of more coming on the dancing eye This is a critic’s nightmare: name the colors and make a catalogue. Start with that somewhat greenish column lower left, the one with the rouge, strawberry reddish line drawn through it, with the pasty clouds, scrawled uncertain images at the top, the green under the pressure of the brush and from the power of the wash fading in and out unevenly. untranslatable faint markings, red and black lines suggesting something not depicting anything at all, a Byzantine art nothing you discern like any lines composing a skeletal view what we know is how cathedrals wither under erasure How miraculous if a word appeared, some fishhook to ensnare the thoughts rushing by. What if in that yellow band (my favorite of the features, my eye always seeks it out) he’d written words like El Arroyo de los Baños, and then we’d look for twisting blue canals banked in sunlit concrete, the sky over the San Joaquin toward the western hills. But before we’d gone far down that road, the sky would have broken into shards, like dry leaves, down into blue and red stripes in thick parallels divided by hard lines, the canals would crack, turn gray, and evaporate. Why, then, you’d really wake up. the only title that the painter’s given us what Ocean Park was south of Santa Monica a stretch of beach beyond roof tops in the studio some worried lines and angles made geometry from the other side, the back imagined in a mirror esquisse an artist walks up lays down a long straight edge on virgin canvas then besmirches it with hard lines pushing paint and charcoal in search the scratches for hints of hidden palimpsest not really older but illusions of time passing between the painted layers Charles Tarlton Charles Tarlton: "I am a retired professor who has been writing poetry full time since 2010. I am especially addicted to emphasis and have published ekphrastic tanka prose in KYSO Flash, Haibun Today, Atlas Poetic, Contemporary Haibun Online, Review American, Ekphrastic Review, and Fiction International."
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10/23/2018 10:40:00 pm
Brilliant articulation of Diebenkorn's creative process, showing initial inspiration, second and third variations, with final coda, all in one frame.
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